Need editor for Story with some incest

[Ldy_Sea]

and more. This is chapter 4 of my 12 cams series. Please let me know if you're interested. I can send in DOC format. Lines are numbered for your reference.

I need spelling and punctuation checks mostly (commas and semicolons are my nemesis).

Thanks in advance.

 

[SueAnne443]

trouble with semi colons...

I know what you mean...i write in short sentences because i am coma and semi challenged.