Need Editor for my first story

[in2mec]

Hi,

This is my first attempt at writing some of the erotic stories and experiences in my head.

My first story introduces an 18 year old guy in the navy. He was sexually abused by an older brother and is shy around girls. Rather than being sexually repressed he has a normal to high sex drive.

The first Chapter is about 1000.

In time he will find out he is a young man with a strong sex drive that struggles accepting his past, enjoying MM and MF and MMF sex.

If this genre is of your liking, your help would be appreciated.

 

[_Lynn_]

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[in2mec]

Thank You, I did not realize that private messaging was turned off.

I should be able to receive messages now.

 

[sr71plt]

If you don't get a fit with an editor and can receive an edit as a Word tracking change attachment, I'd be willing to do a copy edit of this first chapter. Couldn't do much on content on something that isn't finished, though, and I normally wouldn't commit to anything that wasn't finished. I think you might have trouble finding an editor here for the genres you list, but I write those myself. If you need a basic edit of what you have and can handle Word, you can PM me and I'll give you an e-mail address to send a Word attachment to.

 

[robertreams]

I can do it if you are ready. PM me and I will send e-mail address

 

[sr71plt]

I can do it if you are ready. PM me and I will send e-mail address

It's done, although only chapter one. He may be interested in you for ongoing chapters of it.

 

[robertreams]

No prob, not a contest.