Need editor for follow up Chapter

[n2anal78]

My story "Date Night with Wife's Friend" has been in dire need of a follow up chapter (feel free to read the comments) I finally have chapter 2 complete and would love editing help.

I usually run into trouble keeping my tenses straight and have a bad habit of over looking run-on sentences. Any other grammatical help is appreciated

Thanks in advance for anyone who could give me a hand.

 

[n2anal78]

My story "Date Night with Wife's Friend" has been in dire need of a follow up chapter (feel free to read the comments) I finally have chapter 2 complete and would love editing help.

I usually run into trouble keeping my tenses straight and have a bad habit of over looking run-on sentences. Any other grammatical help is appreciated

Thanks in advance for anyone who could give me a hand.

https://www.literotica.com/s/date-night-with-wifes-friend