need editor for first time writer..

[emerald_a]

Hi there....I enjoy writing erotic stories but would like some feedback on my first of what I hope will be many before submitting it.

 

[teufel_piet@hot]

I'll volunteer. I won't rewrite it, though - editors point out problems - they can't be expected to do the author's job

 

[Solaris the Elf]

Hope you don't mind me bumping in but...

I too could use an editor to help me with my first time story and I'm hoping to submit it to the Halloween contest 2002.

It is not too big just about three to four pages. I think I might get it done by midnight central time USA.

If anyone would like to help me with this story as in beta reading or just plain edit it, PM me.