Need editor for first time gay male story

[Reshbod]

This story has been rattling around in my head for a while, so I finally wrote it out. I have never written from the gay perspective, but I thought it would be a good exercise. I want an honest editor who will tell me if it sucks or is decent or even entertaining. If you are interested please PM me here. I don't check this site daily, but I will get back with you.

Thanks.