Darkniciad
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I was contemplating the storyline of an old file I wrote long ago as a back-story for a character, planning to update it and expand it into an erotic horror story for submission here. As I was thinking about it at work, this song popped into my head for some reason.
http://www.lyricsfreak.com/g/genesis/home+by+the+sea_20058884.html
An entirely new story sprang to life, demanding to be written.
I'd like to have an editor look it over, possibly expanding the physical descriptions of the two main characters ( I have links, images, and information that should flesh out the vision of them in my head to aid this ) and to let me know if it actually has the potential I feel like it does.
I'm also looking for opinions as to whether it follows the song *too* closely, and may need some rewriting to dim the association between my story and the song a bit.
The story is erotic horror set in my fantasy world, although it is completely disconnected from all my other stories and characters at this time. There is little in the way of magic or D&D flavor to the story, it has a more supernatural than magical tone.
It has elements of D/s and reluctance/non-conscent, to narrow down the type of person who might be willing to edit/look it over a little more.
This would be my first venture outside the comfortable confines of Sci-Fi/Fantasy, and I decided to test the water a bit before just diving in.
If you think you would be interested, send me a PM and we can establish email communication to pass the story along. Due to the content, there are few places I could upload and link to the story. I wish we had a .txt attachment option here, which would make it much easier.
Even if you're not interested in editing, feel free to PM me to get the story and give it the once over, offering an opinion about whether it has any potential or whether it's just too close to the song to pass muster, keeping in mind that this is a first draft pounded out in a fit of pure inspiration
I'll be leaving for work in a few minutes, so it will likely be this evening before any PMs get answered.
I'll close by thanking anyone who responds in advance.
http://www.lyricsfreak.com/g/genesis/home+by+the+sea_20058884.html
An entirely new story sprang to life, demanding to be written.
I'd like to have an editor look it over, possibly expanding the physical descriptions of the two main characters ( I have links, images, and information that should flesh out the vision of them in my head to aid this ) and to let me know if it actually has the potential I feel like it does.
I'm also looking for opinions as to whether it follows the song *too* closely, and may need some rewriting to dim the association between my story and the song a bit.
The story is erotic horror set in my fantasy world, although it is completely disconnected from all my other stories and characters at this time. There is little in the way of magic or D&D flavor to the story, it has a more supernatural than magical tone.
It has elements of D/s and reluctance/non-conscent, to narrow down the type of person who might be willing to edit/look it over a little more.
This would be my first venture outside the comfortable confines of Sci-Fi/Fantasy, and I decided to test the water a bit before just diving in.
If you think you would be interested, send me a PM and we can establish email communication to pass the story along. Due to the content, there are few places I could upload and link to the story. I wish we had a .txt attachment option here, which would make it much easier.
Even if you're not interested in editing, feel free to PM me to get the story and give it the once over, offering an opinion about whether it has any potential or whether it's just too close to the song to pass muster, keeping in mind that this is a first draft pounded out in a fit of pure inspiration
I'll be leaving for work in a few minutes, so it will likely be this evening before any PMs get answered.
I'll close by thanking anyone who responds in advance.
