Need Editor for Cheating Girlfriend story

[subboy01]

Hi, can anyone help me out?

thanks

sb

 

[meg1]

Hi, can anyone help me out?

thanks

sb

hi subboy01,

You get a better response when you tell the editors how long your story is and what you are looking for (help with grammar, flow, continuity, story ideas, sentence structure) so they know what they are getting into when they respond.

 

[subboy01]

hi

hi, mainly grammar, punctuations. it's about 1 page and a half