SydisticHaze
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- Apr 15, 2010
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So anyway i am looking for an editor to give me some feed back here and there I already got most of everything that was wrong with the grammar and structure but my eyes tend to skip over random things since I know what it is supposed to say but that might not be what it says. I have been receiving pretty good views and votes so far but there is always room to improve.
Story itself is about a pair of lesbians, Edana and Vela it switches between their perspectives. Vela is a cop who is investigating murders where the people have been dissolved leaving only their skin. I don't go too into detail so not so much gory stuff. Edana is real, well she is a little weird. She is obsessed with aliens and she is the submissive type so you will see where that is going quickly. It turns out it is an alien and things escalate from there. She is not an ugly alien she is quite beautiful. Anyway she is androgynous so expect ovipository (ie egg laying) since she is more or less related to a wasp/butterfly. Not to worry that does not happen for a few chapters. As for contents expect blood, profanity, a bit of rape, a little romance, death; pretty much real life if there was a psycho alien on the loose eating people. Keep in mind there is a real story here so do not expect it to be just a romp fest. There is between 1 and 2 loving scenes per chapter. Depends on how frisky they get.
As for how long the story is I have no clue yet probably going to be between 10 - 20 chapters at 10 pages or so per chapter. Just giving you a heads up on what you are about to get waist deep in if you decide to help me. Already got 2 chapters done working on the third. If you interested pm me and we will discuss the details.
Story itself is about a pair of lesbians, Edana and Vela it switches between their perspectives. Vela is a cop who is investigating murders where the people have been dissolved leaving only their skin. I don't go too into detail so not so much gory stuff. Edana is real, well she is a little weird. She is obsessed with aliens and she is the submissive type so you will see where that is going quickly. It turns out it is an alien and things escalate from there. She is not an ugly alien she is quite beautiful. Anyway she is androgynous so expect ovipository (ie egg laying) since she is more or less related to a wasp/butterfly. Not to worry that does not happen for a few chapters. As for contents expect blood, profanity, a bit of rape, a little romance, death; pretty much real life if there was a psycho alien on the loose eating people. Keep in mind there is a real story here so do not expect it to be just a romp fest. There is between 1 and 2 loving scenes per chapter. Depends on how frisky they get.
As for how long the story is I have no clue yet probably going to be between 10 - 20 chapters at 10 pages or so per chapter. Just giving you a heads up on what you are about to get waist deep in if you decide to help me. Already got 2 chapters done working on the third. If you interested pm me and we will discuss the details.
