Need an editor?

[stonepretender]

Hi Authors

Willing to look at your "GAY MALE" stories and correct, advise and suggest.

Thanks

 

[mikey2much]

a happy customer

I am happy to report that stonepretender is a very good editor. He helped me turn a fair story into a good story. I want to take this time to thank him.
Thank you, KABS.

I am hopeful that we will try something together in the next few weeks.
mike

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Yeah, uhm, thanks, I guess.

 

[stonepretender]

Thank you for your flattering words.
You are clearly a well-experienced writer and I hope to one day achieve your status.

 

[mikey2much]

I never gave it a thought.

I guess that we both overlooked the underage black curtain. It is hard to argue a noble ideal like freedom of speech and then have to offer a story of bathroom sex as what we are fighting about.

I never saw it as being anything bad in that regard.

Mike

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Hi Authors

Willing to look at your "GAY MALE" stories and correct, advise and suggest.

Thanks

Okay, shock and awe is all nice and well. Can you go away now?

 

[sr71plt]

Okay, shock and awe is all nice and well. Can you go away now?

Why? You advertise here too--certainly more than this poster has (both of which is just fine). And you say you don't do gay male. What's wrong with someone else saying they will do it?

 

[stonepretender]

What are you on about?

I guess that we both overlooked the underage black curtain...I never saw it as being anything bad in that regard.

Are you talking about the rejection?

 

[mikey2much]

story rejection

Yes I am talking about the rejection. I hate that it happened and I don't think the story deserved it. Do you think there was underage sex in the story?
mike

 

[Peccato]

Need a dedicated Editor!

Hi, my penname is Peccato,

I have been receiving a lot of comments or feedback complaining about my spelling and grammar. It is very infuriating, but understandable since English is my second language.

I live in Holland and studied English. As a hobby, I write in English to maintain my second language. Now, it feels very depressing, that I am failing miserably in my efforts.

The story Give A Name... has significant potential in my opinion, but I need a dedicated Editor to polish it off and make it shine.

It is a fan fiction based on the TV series Supernatural. It is quite a bit, about 45,000 plus in words. The brothers are lovers in this story, which makes your willingness to correct and comment on gay male stories... excellent!

I am looking forward to your reply and hopefully in the future your cooperation. I could really use your help and expertise.

Met Vriendelijk Groet,
Pecccato.

 

[jeninflorida]

I’m looking to work with someone but I don’t have any gay male stories….I do have group stories

Hi Authors

Willing to look at your "GAY MALE" stories and correct, advise and suggest.

Thanks

 

[SweetFallenAngel]

Hi Authors

Willing to look at your "GAY MALE" stories and correct, advise and suggest.

Thanks

Would You be willing to look at my first story? It is about what I do when my husband is out of town working and then what we do when he comes home. It is my first story and have got good comments from people who have read it. I need someone to give me suggestions and advise. Let me know please.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Why? You advertise here too--certainly more than this poster has (both of which is just fine). And you say you don't do gay male. What's wrong with someone else saying they will do it?

I'm with you, SR. I was being dismissive in a manner which was intended to be other than malicious. In other words, cute. But this was not properly conveyed. Apologies to all involved.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Would You be willing to look at my first story? It is about what I do when my husband is out of town working and then what we do when he comes home. It is my first story and have got good comments from people who have read it. I need someone to give me suggestions and advise. Let me know please.

Man, my eyes are bad! When I responded to the previous response it shows up clear as day in B&W, but I can't see the pink text against the light background. Maybe I should die now, can't see very well anymore, this sucks!

 

[Sweat_pea]

Um Hi! It's me. lol

Well, I tried to do this through proper channels but it doesn't want to accept my PW for some reason. Changed it twice lol...Oh well maybe this will work.

OK - Here goes. My very first story is about a young 20 yr old Marine wife named "Cynthia" who's beloved husband has been overseas fighting in Iraq for two years, having left just after they were married. Her husband "Brian" is a much older man or 31.

Her dilemma is that she married very young, on her 18th birthday and so is still very inexperienced in comparison to her older husband. Upon learning that he is finally coming home to her she decides that she wants to learn to give a better blowjob, to give him something that he will truly remember for the rest of his life.

So Cynthia studies the fine art of deep throat, and ends up learning from sources like Anastasia Blue and Sasha Grey, as well as several instructional videos, and then buys a latex dildo. After learning from those she learns from she comes to learn to give really messy, slimy, slippery head to her husband in her mind (as it is for the reader to decide whether Cynthia has lost her grip with reality or if she really has some psychological/spiritual bond with him through this sex toy), from thousands of miles away.

There are actually several categories this could fall under I think, like toys and masturbation, which is where I was going to send it, loving wives, fetish, and first time. It is a pretty hardcore story in places but is basically a story of the lengths a girl will go to for the man she loves. The story being based roughly on myself.

Anyone interested?

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... Well, I tried to do this through proper channels but it doesn't want to accept my PW for some reason. Changed it twice lol...Oh well maybe this will work.

...

Anyone interested?

If you mean the official Volunteer Editors programme, it is mostly defunct.

Asking through here is fine, but you might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[Sweat_pea]

I did it me thinks. They sure are particular on what kind of pics you up load huh? I have pics of me but I think I am going to have to resize it. lol

Try messaging me though. I mean if you're an editor.