Need an Editor

[O2]

I have two lesbian stories 12,569 and 8,800 words that could use another's eyes. I've gone over them a couple of times.

Thanks in advance,

O2

 

[Guest]

You've given more info (category, number of stories, and word count) than a lot of writers do when asking for an editor, but you'll probably get more response if you specify what you'd like an editor to do: grammar and spelling, plot, character development, pacing, etc.

 

[O2]

Okie Dokie.

I'd like a second opinion on punctuation and a bit if a critique as to how the story flows, past/ present tense, should I put more detail in the sex scenes.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Okie Dokie.

I'd like a second opinion on punctuation and a bit if a critique as to how the story flows, past/ present tense, should I put more detail in the sex scenes.

The holidays are upon us, and you have asked in a much more acceptable manner than others (who shall remain unnamed).

I will help if help is still desired.

If so, PM me and we can further delineate our contact information.