need an editor...still

[cmhsgrad02]

Been working on a story for a long time. Some editors help, some don't. I have 5 chapters written.

Chapter 1 intros 2 characters (1 m 1 f) (mostly done= 95% grammar)
Chapter 2 leads into a sex scene (still needs work) and tells the female's story
Chapter 3 tells the male's story and has 2 sex scenes
Chapter 4 intro a new female and creates dynamic for rest of story
Chapter 5 (needs the most help) a "T or D" chapter

I am working on a 6th chapter but i need some insight on how to proceed.

I want to put it up in the "novel and novella" category