Need an Editor Pretty Please...Erotic Coupling/Romantic

[CrimsonCryptic]

I am about ready to post my second story submission (my first on Literotica being for the Halloween Story Contest). I didn't use an editor on the contest story in order to make the deadline. I would, however, be interested in finding the right person to edit/critique my second short story.
As mentioned before, it's categorized as "Erotic Coupling/Romantic" and it begins in a mortuary. If you're interested - let me know I'd like to get the story posted ASAP.
Thanks
~Crimson

 

[PacoFear]

Let us know how many words, CC?

 

[CrimsonCryptic]

3,451 words

 

[PacoFear]

CC,

Turn your private messages on, girlie! S'not fair senting me a one-sided PM. There are instructions on turning on your PM's on the Available Editors for October 2010.

I can weasel your story into my schedule, but I can't do your quick turnaround. I will be on the road for the weekend so I won't be able to touch it until Monday.

If you can wait that long (I know what's it like to wait, I sympathize ). CC, in your e-mail let me know if there's something in particular you're worried about -- grammar, punctuation, spelling and/or substantive stuff like dialogue, character development, plot, flow, pacing, etc.

Best,

-PF

 

[CrimsonCryptic]

PF - I did change the settings in options, but must not have stuck. I'll go back and make sure on the PM's. My apologies. I'll send you the story per your instruction

 

[PacoFear]

Story returned to author with edits and comments.

 

[CrimsonCryptic]

Thank you! Story has been submitted.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Story returned to author with edits and comments.

Thanks, PF