Need an editor for my first story

[dreamscubed]

I have written a story on a wife's first time to stray. I'm looking for someone to critique its readability - flow, character development, erotic content, grammer, etc. This will be my first Literotica post and I want it to be great.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I have written a story on a wife's first time to stray. I'm looking for someone to critique its readability - flow, character development, erotic content, grammer, etc. This will be my first Literotica post and I want it to be great.

If you're still looking, I'll PM you my email address.

 

[dreamscubed]

Help with story

Thanks for agreeing to help. I sent the story to you via email in a Word format.

Let me know if you can't open it or have questions.

Rick.