Need an editor for a threesome story

TheHotJD

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Hey, neighbors --

Anybody got a minute to have a look at a story about a woman's encounter with both her husband and her brother-in-law? I could use a second set of eyes to make sure that I haven't committed any crimes against grammar, spelling or common sense.

I've already got one story up, in case you want to have a look at it:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=313151

You can post here, or PM me, or both if you're interested in lending a hand. Of course, I thank you in advance.
JD
 
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