Need an editor (and a title)

[PerilEyes]

Need an editor (and a title) - DISREGARD

I've just finished the first chapter to an untitled Fetish story and would like some assistance in looking it over and naming it.

It's about a successful woman who develops a sleep eating disorder (a NSRED) and her partner who exploits it (and then some.)

So if anyone's interested (I welcome multiple bodies), reply back or message me. Thanks.

EDIT: Leave it to me to solve my problem AFTER I post this. Found a few editors.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I've just finished the first chapter to an untitled Fetish story and would like some assistance in looking it over and naming it.

It's about a successful woman who develops a sleep eating disorder (a NSRED) and her partner who exploits it (and then some.)

So if anyone's interested (I welcome multiple bodies), reply back or message me. Thanks.

EDIT: Leave it to me to solve my problem AFTER I post this. Found a few editors.

So you have written a story, already have an editor, but lack a title? Okay. Based on your brief description possible titles could be FUCK EATING, EATING PIE, CUM AND GO, or countless others.

 

[PerilEyes]

Those titles leave nothing to imagination. Why so sexual? I think I've settles on "Desires & Disorders" or even "Nocturnal Desires & Disorders" to make it more specific. Although I can't decide whether to keep "Nocturnal" in there..

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Those titles leave nothing to imagination. Why so sexual? I think I've settles on "Desires & Disorders" or even "Nocturnal Desires & Disorders" to make it more specific. Although I can't decide whether to keep "Nocturnal" in there..

I was trying to be funny, and failed miserably, as usual. Seriously, titles can be difficult. How does one summarize the message of a story in a few words? This can be a challenge, sometimes moreso than writing the story. Unfortunately I have no "inside" information.

 

[sr71plt]

Those titles leave nothing to imagination. Why so sexual? I think I've settles on "Desires & Disorders" or even "Nocturnal Desires & Disorders" to make it more specific. Although I can't decide whether to keep "Nocturnal" in there..

Don't know much about the story, but I'd probably keep the "Nocturnal" and drop the rest. And "Nocturnal" itself is probably inviting and evocative enough.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... So if anyone's interested (I welcome multiple bodies), reply back or message me. ...

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Make sure that the next box down (Receive Private Messages only from Buddies and Moderators) is NOT ticked. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[PacoFear]

Throwing in a random title suggestion.

"Midnight Snack." Or perhaps "Her Midnight Snack."

I think the latter is a smidge more suggestive. Either have the benefit of being simple and friendly and allude to the sort of guilty pleasures we can all relate to.

Good luck,

-PF

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Throwing in a random title suggestion.

"Midnight Snack." Or perhaps "Her Midnight Snack."

I think the latter is a smidge more suggestive. Either have the benefit of being simple and friendly and allude to the sort of guilty pleasures we can all relate to.

Good luck,

-PF

Perhaps keeping the title intriguing is better to lure more readers. Just had a new story idea pop up, calling it UNTITLED, I think. Makes readers wonder what it's all about.