Need Advice

[Calvero]

Hello,

I've read alot of erotica and decide to try my hand at it a couple of month ago.

I realise now that it is finish that I don't know how to go from here. In fact altough I like the result myself I don't know if it's good at all.

It's a sci-fi/erotica story. But since english is not my main language I realise that it may not be as good as I think it is.

My question is two part I guess, is there a review board somewhere who can 1) tell me if my story is good 2) help if it's good enough but is gramaticaly incorrect at some point and what to do about it?

Thank's

Calvero

 

[brightlyiburn]

There's a volunteer editors program. I would recommend finding an editor before you request feedback. They'll be able to fix any errors caused by the language barrier.
Also, I don't know what languages, but Lit does support languages other than English now.

 

[cantdog]

There's also a Story Feedback forum where such things are done, within their guidelines.

A story, or a link to one, is posted and receives criticism. The threads at the top of it explain how it is done.