Need advice-how much is too much

[Wildfire427]

I will admit to being a very amateur writer. I write as I see the story unfold in my head. I know there are about a million things that I could do better, but I have one basic question.

How much story is too much?

The two stories I have linked here are my newest ones. They have both been received well and I have received good votes and positive feedback. My concern is am I putting too much story in and not enough sex scenes. As I said, I write as I see the story played out in my head. I think it is important to reveal what a character thinks or sees, but I try not to do it in an overdone fashion.

Any thoughts or comments would be appreciated. Don’t know if I’ll change the way I write, but I do want to know. Also feel free to criticize any other aspects of my writing as well. If I’m going to put myself out on the end of the plank, I might as well expect to get wet!

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[Wildfire427]

Sorry about links

Guess I will have to figure out this link to story thing. Soon as I do I'll get them up. Sorry.

 

[Zad]

How much is to much

In my mind, to much is never enough! I like what you've tried to do with your story's. When I write, I also let story unfold deep in my mind. Long before I sit down at my PC. Keep working. Zad

 

[Wildfire427]

Thanks Zad

I appreciate your input. I am going to give that link thing another try here.

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