Need advice for Sequel

[sexxxgoddess]

I recently got my first erotic story i've ever written published on Literotica. I want to write a sequel to it, but I'm looking for some criticism on the story first so I can make the second one better. I've gotten a lot of anonymous feedback, but most of it is just people telling me that they liked the story. It's called Anal Exxxplorations and it is rated at 4.51 right now and ranked 37 in the top lists category anal.

Here is a link to my story:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=71180

Please read it, and give me honest feedback, good and bad, so that I can make the sequel even more exciting!!!

Thanks!