lilguy
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need advice. Making a story. It going to be differnt because I am trying to make it like a game. Where some consequence can get you killed. Here the story
"GTS- (Giantess Tiny Shrinking)
This is a story with separate characters. Each character has his or owns story dealing with shrinking. The world of GTS is a dangerous one. Some Paths lead to victory and some lead to death ending the story. Beware which choice you take. Also please don't make EVERY choice a death choice.
The Giantess- Lonely geeky outcast Heather becomes part of an experiment. She thinks she testing a new medicine The scientist secretly do extra test on her. The test a growth hormone. Something goes wrong and she becomes a giantess. The chemical increases her sex drive and makes her crazy. She wants vengeance on those who mistreated her.
Shrinking Chris- Tom is playing around with Chemical in his college when he shrinks. He must get across town to a shop. At this shop is the chemicals he need for the antidote. Normally this would take minutes. At his size it an adventure. The place is filled with insane sorority girls, sex craze teachers, stoners, roaches, rats, bull dyke feminist, and all type of beast. Everyone seemed a little crazy Your job is to keep him alive.
Kim- She is a young tease. Kim all ways loved to tease men with her perfect busty body. It got her in troubles many of time. It also got her kicked out of school when she flashed a teacher. She was being sent to military school. She was taken on a boat and was going to be ship to the inland where the school located. Instead the waves picked up wrecking the ship. She washed up an inland that seems like a city. To her surprise they were tiny men. They were like little toys. This was a dream come true. Their weapons didn’t seem to work on her. So many men to tease. most importanly it no one there to push you around OR IS IT."
The question is how much chyoo would let me get away with it. Because foe tension purpose I have to kill a few folks. namely in the first choice. Also the 3rd choice one of the thread going to have a stroyline choice where beast that terrioze your little friends and you have to outsmart it or fight it. So it may have a war of a monstes type stuff. The first choice may have a big body count. The secon choice will have a lot of way to bring your life to end. Normaly I think it be ok sense most of the violence not raping it needed for the action. It all in B movie fun. But then agan Chyoo can be a bunch of dicks
Also any good choices you can give me for Deaths or threats. Because I want to have some choices ready before they accept it. To give the people a sense of full releaze game. So any cool death or way to avoid death. Like fighting a roach with a needle. Or using a shring and needle as a gataling hook. Then using a paper clip to glide down the shring. Stuff like that
"GTS- (Giantess Tiny Shrinking)
This is a story with separate characters. Each character has his or owns story dealing with shrinking. The world of GTS is a dangerous one. Some Paths lead to victory and some lead to death ending the story. Beware which choice you take. Also please don't make EVERY choice a death choice.
The Giantess- Lonely geeky outcast Heather becomes part of an experiment. She thinks she testing a new medicine The scientist secretly do extra test on her. The test a growth hormone. Something goes wrong and she becomes a giantess. The chemical increases her sex drive and makes her crazy. She wants vengeance on those who mistreated her.
Shrinking Chris- Tom is playing around with Chemical in his college when he shrinks. He must get across town to a shop. At this shop is the chemicals he need for the antidote. Normally this would take minutes. At his size it an adventure. The place is filled with insane sorority girls, sex craze teachers, stoners, roaches, rats, bull dyke feminist, and all type of beast. Everyone seemed a little crazy Your job is to keep him alive.
Kim- She is a young tease. Kim all ways loved to tease men with her perfect busty body. It got her in troubles many of time. It also got her kicked out of school when she flashed a teacher. She was being sent to military school. She was taken on a boat and was going to be ship to the inland where the school located. Instead the waves picked up wrecking the ship. She washed up an inland that seems like a city. To her surprise they were tiny men. They were like little toys. This was a dream come true. Their weapons didn’t seem to work on her. So many men to tease. most importanly it no one there to push you around OR IS IT."
The question is how much chyoo would let me get away with it. Because foe tension purpose I have to kill a few folks. namely in the first choice. Also the 3rd choice one of the thread going to have a stroyline choice where beast that terrioze your little friends and you have to outsmart it or fight it. So it may have a war of a monstes type stuff. The first choice may have a big body count. The secon choice will have a lot of way to bring your life to end. Normaly I think it be ok sense most of the violence not raping it needed for the action. It all in B movie fun. But then agan Chyoo can be a bunch of dicks
Also any good choices you can give me for Deaths or threats. Because I want to have some choices ready before they accept it. To give the people a sense of full releaze game. So any cool death or way to avoid death. Like fighting a roach with a needle. Or using a shring and needle as a gataling hook. Then using a paper clip to glide down the shring. Stuff like that