Need a volunteer

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

I need a volunteer to read my new story and tell me if the way it's done works before I submit it. It's a story in a story and I'm not sure how well it will hold a readers attention. Anyone who wants to take this on I will email it to them.
Thanks,
Wicked

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

That was quick! LOL. Thanks BigT for taking the time to do this.
Wicked