Need a feedback a story I'm currently working on

[Sai_dias_29]

Right now, I'm working an incest story that has superpower elements in it. The editor I'm working with right now has been wonderful in helping me writing this, but I would like an outside opinion on the story. Someone who hasn't read it, so that I can get a fresh outside perspective.

 

[Sai_dias_29]

bump

 

[Sai_dias_29]

Bump!

 

[alohadave]

I'll take a look at it for you. What kind of feedback are you looking for?

 

[Sai_dias_29]

I got a few responses, but I would still like a few more second-eyes take a look at my story.

 

[Series 6]

I got a few responses, but I would still like a few more second-eyes take a look at my story.

I'll take a look at it. How long is it?

 

[Sai_dias_29]

I'll take a look at it. How long is it?

It's about 19,000+ words.