Need a beta reader to read the first chapter of my story.

[Sai_dias_29]

Is it possible to get someone to beta read the first chapter of my story? I just need someone to take a look and tell me if the writing works or not, or what I can improve. The story is a re-write of my first story.

The story is an incest story, with MMF, Mother-son-father, voyeurism and maybe cuckolding(depending on how you look at it).

 

[FelHarper]

I’ll take a look, if no one has Contacted you already. Looks like you have an editor, so you just want a general impression? Let me know, PM, whatever suites you.