Need a beta reader for an exhibitionist/light BDSM story

[Saunaaddict]

I've used a range of editors before and my experiences have been positive. However they mainly offer advice on spelling, grammar. I want to make sure this story "works", and I also want general advice on plot, characters, structure, phrasing...everything really. Is anyone willing to help?

 

[MacHardy]

Beta reading

Hi,

Always ready to read and comment. I am a qualified editor, so you tell me what you want.