Necrophilia

[KindredFlame]

I say write it, submit it, and see. They can't die during sex, which is vore, or die after sex, which is snuff. Nothing really states they can't die before the sex.

I have struggled with this, and have put a lot of words on digital paper. A friend in the forum looked it over and quite rightly pointed out I had a lot of strands running i jumbled them up. Striping out one story line is the only process that will clear the way.

 

[Carnevil9]

As the MC is staring longingly at the dead body, wondering if he should fuck it or not, he suddenly feels a chill run through his body and catches a slight movement out of the corner of his eye. He whirls around to see a ghostly being floating in the air behind him!

"That is my body right there. I died a virgin, and am doomed to wander the earth until I finally have sex. That will be very unlikely after I am in the ground, so please fuck me now. Fuck me now! Fuck me NOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW......"

There goes your problems with non-consent!

 

[KindredFlame]

Apparently there is an internal coolness that is like no other. Going with a dead body.

 

[dirk2024]

It's weird I guess but I think if well done it could be really interesting and even really hot.

How can it be hot when the bodies are cold?

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I think you'd have to go beyond just the dead bodies, maybe into reanimation type stuff. Supernatural, monsters, ghosts, ghouls.

Think of 'Death Becomes Her' with Goldie Hawn and Meryl Streep. They're dead, but they're mighty lively.


He gets deep into his examination when suddenly ....


'Hey, Mister, what do you think you're doing down there?'

 

[KindredFlame]

How can it be hot when the bodies are cold?

Yes it was first draft and I lost my way. Story is on hold.

 

[kreemi_pi]

Yes it was first draft and I lost my way. Story is on hold.

I thought you were off to a really good start

 

[KindredFlame]

I thought you were off to a really good start

I did lose my way adding far to many ideas into the story no clear direction. I did have a look at it the other day but I had little inspiration to play with it.

 

[kreemi_pi]

I did lose my way adding far to many ideas into the story no clear direction. I did have a look at it the other day but I had little inspiration to play with it.

Well i really liked the part you showed me. I hope you pick it up again sometime.

 

[KindredFlame]

Thank you. I guess the hate messages got to me a bit.

 

[Statius]

Thank you. I guess the hate messages got to me a bit.

Don't let the hate messages get you. Write your story.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

He's a practicing Warlock or Shaman of some kind. Through his various manipulations, he finds out he has the ability to 'restore life', sort of. After the crash of a college girls beach volleyball team with multiple victims, he creates a harem of undead sex kittens. They can return to the team with the girls that didn't die in the crash but find they have some kind of extra abilities and help the team go on to win multiple titles. Thing is, they have to return to him every few weeks so as not to die again.

 

[KindredFlame]

He's a practicing Warlock or Shaman of some kind. Through his various manipulations, he finds out he has the ability to 'restore life', sort of. After the crash of a college girls beach volleyball team with multiple victims, he creates a harem of undead sex kittens. They can return to the team with the girls that didn't die in the crash but find they have some kind of extra abilities and help the team go on to win multiple titles. Thing is, they have to return to him every few weeks so as not to die again.

It’s another idea. Thank you my thoughts at the moment are that there are 21 girls in all. The first 20 he prepares with precision following the strict protocols despite his fascination. The 21 seems to becoming alive showing no signs of Rigamortus her skin gradually coming to life as the others slip away into the darkness.