A different college life.

Nightscream89

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So I was playing with this idea a bit.

A woman in her mid 40's has everything A great husband, a beautifull 18 year old daughter that is set to start college, an ambitious 20 year old son already 2 years into college, both studying locally so they live at home.

However one day her life changes, or well technically it ends.
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Now I realize this first part needs to be explained without too much detail because of the sites rules on pain and suffering, so I will probably do this as some flashback of sorts, leaving out any details that are against the rules.

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Thus her new life begins as a 18 year old girl starting college, much like her daughter.

But then she meets her own children, who start school late this year because they obviously just lost their mom, as she is assigned to get her own daughter up to speed with what she missed from school, they become best friends quickly.
Other stuff like what if ... [I hate to edit with an axe, but its my job]

I feel like this could make a great story. Anyone have any thoughts on this?
 
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Yes, interesting scenario. Afaik pain and suffering is not ruled out as long as it is not sexualized.

The interesting question is, in what way a 40 year old mind in a 18 year old body acts differently?

A nice subplot could be her getting back at her husband, whom she still loves. He mourns, but there is something about this 18yo girl his daughter brings home from college that reminds him of his late wife. So what do the children think as her dad and her friend start to date and get intimate.
 
I like it, but it sounds like almost too much plot for a short story. You could write it as a novel, or a series of chapters where each chapter tells one small part of the overarching story yet still has a bit of a satisfying conclusion.
 
The interesting question is, in what way a 40 year old mind in a 18 year old body acts differently?

Her taste in music and movies crystalized in 2003.

She's really good at using a desktop Windows computer but she's bad at phones and social media.

She's an experienced pro at drinking, but is weirdly worried and judgy about marijuana.

She's really skilled at blowjobs and sex, and confidently gives directions in the bedroom.

She's effective at negotiation and conflict resolution, while the "other" 18-year-olds are terrified of talking to older adults.

She can drive a stick shift but can never get Apple carplay to work🤣
 
Penny, thanks for your ideas. I think these could be used very well to show her confusing status.
Apple carplay
BTW. What is apple car play?

She's really skilled at blowjobs and sex, and confidently gives directions in the bedroom.
Is that how a woman acts "mature" in the bedroom? Let us assume you @PennyThompson , are a bit older than 18, what would you be telling an 18yo girl about what you learned about sex?
 
Penny, thanks for your ideas. I think these could be used very well to show her confusing status.

BTW. What is apple car play?


Is that how a woman acts "mature" in the bedroom? Let us assume you @PennyThompson , are a bit older than 18, what would you be telling an 18yo girl about what you learned about sex?
Apple car play is a program provided by Apple that comes installed in certain vehicles to facilitate playing music or podcasts from your iphone over the car speakers.
 
BTW. What is apple car play?
It's the app/car feature you can use to connect your iphone to a newish car's infotainment screen, and use your spotify or maps or whatever. It's super useful, but sometimes finnicky!
Is that how a woman acts "mature" in the bedroom? Let us assume you @PennyThompson , are a bit older than 18, what would you be telling an 18yo girl about what you learned about sex?
I would tell them to learn more about what they enjoy and what feels good, and to tell their partner what they want. When you're younger and not very experienced (not that I would claim to be an expert 😅) you don't always know what you like, and you don't always feel confident asking for it.
 
I thought the same. Maybe the son tries to hit on this 18yo chick that he also feels a connection towards but she rejects him. And then he observes in awe as this girl manages to rekindle life's spirits in his father.
I like the drama potential of this triangle, while agree that the son should be left out the "loser" in this, the challenge would be to make him not be resentful about it, and accept his "new" spep-mom of same physical age as he is as a goofy friend eventually.

Both the misplaced mom and the mourning dad would have reservations about getting into this relationship, mom because she dabbled into college life and perhaps inherited relationships of her new body, dad for obvious reasons including exactly because of the "why I'm stealing son's girlfriend?" feel and the age difference, and so on.

She may, however, set the son up with one of her new college friends.
 
As for the beginning, I would ditch the divine being simplifying it and leaving mostly unexplained.

She pushes the girl aside, gets hit with the ramming car, bam, she wakes up in the hospital in the girl's body. The girl didn't get away unscathed, but her injuries are limited to a concussion and some bruising, while mom's original body is destroyed. Because of the concussion and having two sets of memories she's very confused, but the doctors are saying that's sorta normal, and her body's biologic parents (her new other family) are there very supportive and understanding... and that's how she decided to not pursue trying to prove she's not the original inhabitan of the young body and sorta try live as the girl she tried, but apparently failed to save.

But it's even possible she meet her kids right away in hospital already... tragedy unites... but "why are you trying to jump in my dead mom's shoes" may be very off-putting and mom, being wise enough decide to try to avoid that.

Forgot to mention her new body's boyfriend. Who may be a jerk only ever wanting to fuck said body with little care who's there, but that may not be clear from the start, and she may give in trying to replace the girl for everyone, then feel like she cheated on her husband, even though in different body, etc.
 
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It's the app/car feature you can use to connect your iphone to a newish car's infotainment screen, and use your spotify or maps or whatever. It's super useful, but sometimes finnicky!

I would tell them to learn more about what they enjoy and what feels good, and to tell their partner what they want. When you're younger and not very experienced (not that I would claim to be an expert 😅) you don't always know what you like, and you don't always feel confident asking for it.
You know this makes me very sad? That people aren't confident in asking certain things for sex is a great loss. I liken it to a conversation. When you're younger you still need to find out what conversations you like, and also how to approach them. If you're both just telling each other the same thing over and over while only finding it mildly interesting, what are you doing? Maybe one of you is still wildly enthusiastic, but repeating the same conversation from the same angle while you aren't fully into it is just a sad thought.

I was a weird sexual late bloomer, but my confidence grew quickly when the compliments came in. Not about my cock, but about that they felt safe, confident and able to ask anything with me. It is bad that this is something which apparently isn't standard. Why aren't we feeling secure and confident by default when having sex? The outliers should be the lack of confidence!

I'll also contribute something to the topic as not to derail the original idea. I agree with @Rob_Royale. You've got an interesting concept here. You don't need incest to spice it up. It can be much more impactful that after a few spicy hookups that she might have missed in later life she returns to her husband. Love conquers 18yo crazy sex.
 
Basically "Heaven Can Wait" with a sexual slant. "Mom" could end up banging her kids, or living life to the sexual fullest (since she now knows what she didn't know then), or getting back with hubby. Or all of them. A lot of options here.

I've thought of similar concepts, although it's usually a part of me/my soul gets split off, so the "real" me continues on and my family isn't traumatized. Then the powers that be put me in my 18 year old body in another almost identical universe, which allows me to do all the things, especially people ;), I regret not doing when I was younger.
 
Love all the ideas on this!

I agree that incest isn't neccesary, but now I'm thinking of having the son somehow finds out/she confides in him that she is actually his mom. However all of her family is dealing with the trauma of losing her. Husband is swallowed by grief, daughter lashing out sexually. Maybe she has a fun adventure with her daughter where they each bring a guy to the MC's dorm room to have some fun. But later at a party it goes into the direction of the daughter letting herself be used by multiple guys, MC prevents this by calling her son (Maybe first her husband but he doesn't answer the phone. She would know their phone numbers by head.) Son comes and gets his sister and MC out of there, but maybe this is where son starts to have suspicions of something not adding up.

Son has trauma but is trying to hold the family together and stepping up as his father is a broken man and his sister is acting out.

Somehow I want to use the sentence "You're not my mom! Because if you were, you'd be dead!" probably her daughter saying that to her, which would show her the trauma her family has from her supposed death.
 
Anyone have any ideas on if I should have the son find out that this teenage girl is actually his mom in another body? Him trying to reunite her with his broken father, but maybe she wants more than just her (former?) husband?
 
Anyone have any ideas on if I should have the son find out that this teenage girl is actually his mom in another body? Him trying to reunite her with his broken father, but maybe she wants more than just her (former?) husband?
Personally I would go for her going of her own volition. A statement of love conquering everything. Even the ravenous sex and the like can't beat the love with her husband.

The son can feature in there, but more as a friend that lets her connect back to her old family life. Before that she might befriend her kids, but stay away from their home life. She tries to guide them on the right path thanks to her blending in much better. Though eventually she realises her death was impactful, and when she goes to their home, she falls in love again with her husband. Someone she wants to fix.

If you want you can throw a lot off balance. What if she goes to the husband and offers her fertility. New kids so late in life.
 
So I was playing with this idea a bit.

A woman in her mid 40's has everything A great husband, a beautifull 18 year old daughter that is set to start college, an ambitious 20 year old son already 2 years into college, both studying locally so they live at home.

However one day her life changes, or well technically it ends.
------------
Now I realize this first part needs to be explained without too much detail because of the sites rules on pain and suffering, so I will probably do this as some flashback of sorts, leaving out any details that are against the rules.

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Thus her new life begins as a 18 year old girl starting college, much like her daughter.

But then she meets her own children, who start school late this year because they obviously just lost their mom, as she is assigned to get her own daughter up to speed with what she missed from school, they become best friends quickly.
Other stuff like what if ... [I hate to edit with an axe, but its my job]

I feel like this could make a great story. Anyone have any thoughts on this?
Very interesting idea. As long as there is some joy in the pain and suffering or it is consensual I don’t believe there is a problem. However I might be wrong. Good luck with this.
 
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