NCIS story request

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Is their anybody out there that can write a NCIS foot fetish story? It would be about either tony licking Zivas soles and toes or McGee licking abbys soles and toes and the usual sex.
 
Is their anybody out there that can write a NCIS foot fetish story? It would be about either tony licking Zivas soles and toes or McGee licking abbys soles and toes and the usual sex.

Oh, I think that would be a GREAT idea...I think Tony would lick his own cum right off Zeva's boot and McGee would do the same for Abby....
 
I'm offended by this idea. I'm offended by the word "or." Both of these perverted pairings must be included!
 
Hmm, the foot thing really doesn't do anything for me personally but I'm a big NCIS fan and I think this is a wonderful idea in general
 
I have to agree with Calaban. While not into the foot fetish I would love to read a story where Tony finally hooks up with Ziva.
 
How about the local 7-Eleven runs out of Caff-Pow! Oh noo!!!! Abbey is going through withdrawals. She knows that the greatest remaining source of caffeine is Gibbs's body. So she blows him in order to swallow a load of caffeine-laden spooge.

You can just picture her pigtails flapping up and down as she bobs on Gibbs's dick, and Gibbs just standing there with that insufferable smirk on his face.
 
Gibbs needs to smack Ziva upside the head for not doing a blowjob properly.
 
I'm a huge NCIS fan and the big question that enters my mind when I hear about this is - what's the trigger?

The series excells at great storytelling, IMHO, and to do it justice, I think that such a fanfic needs to be organic to the storyline. The trouble with this is that Ziva and Tony have been through all kinds of hell together (The shipping container incident, finding Jenny's dead body, etc.) what could possibly trigger such an encounter when none of these things in the past prompts them to take the leap?

I think you'd need to write it shortly after Tony & the team rescues her from Somalia. If that gesture didn't make Ziva want to pounce on Tony, then nothing ever would.
 
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How about another undercover job where Tony and Ziva have to pose as a married couple like they did shortly after her character was introduced. Only this time it is a longer assignment, and with the added history since the first time one thing could lead to another.
 
Another thing you could do is recount the saucy history between Gibbs and Jenny, which was only ever alluded to in jittery flashbacks. Their history is so vague, you could do virtually anything you want with it. All we know is that it happened in Paris, and that it seemingly ended with Jenny betraying Gibbs, though not so badly that they weren't able to restart a friendship a few years later.
 
I got the feeling that she did not betray him. It seemed more like she chose her career over having a relationship.
 
I got the feeling that she did not betray him. It seemed more like she chose her career over having a relationship.

I dunno... There was that flashback once where you saw Gibbs being arrested by a bunch of foreign (presumably French) cops and as they were arresting him, he looked across the street to see Jenny amongst the crowd, watching the whole scene.

The impression that I got from that was either that she was the cause of Gibbs' arrest, or that she could've done something to save him, but didn't and Gibbs wasn't happy about that.
 
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