Nasty Anonymous Feedback

[Mistress Blue]

I have recently posted my latest story of a series Who Says Marriage is Dull Ch. 5

I have received some nasty email in regards to this story. For example:

"one more AIDS spreading slimy slutwhorewife story...sigh"

HELLO, you're reading internet porn! How many of the stories here promote the use of condoms? They are fantasy not reality. I don't write anything to get people to run out and have unprotected sex with strangers.

Another wrote:

"A woman that writes this...thing...must sure be a real lowlife."

This coming from someone cruising a porn site.

My story was listed in the Fetish Category and the description said "Ben takes Rachel to Las Vegas and ends up a cuckhold"

Was there really a lot of gray area in that? If someone finds this content distasteful or offensive, why do they bother to click on the story to begin with?

I just don't understand. If someone finds pornography offensive, then they don't belong here in the first place. If they were looking for romance and tender kisses...they picked the wrong category.

Considering that in the first email every other word was misspelled, I immediately knew this comment must have come from Einstein.

None of this was very constructive. I don't believe that the story is written poorly, but I can't be sure because the only thing these anonymous emails mentioned was content.

I take exception to being called a lowlife. Is this world such a sad place that people with nothing better to do just insult others to make themselves feel better?

I would definitely appreciate some
constructive feedback even if the content is not your cup of tea.

Thanks to all.

 

[spyro1123]

i think i see why peole have some trouble with this one. It isnt poorly written. The caricters do seem a little emotionaly shallow, they dont seem to have any feelings. Your protaginist mentions that he is being humilliated but he doesnt leave, do anything about it, or explain why he isnt leaving or doing anything.

The peeing scene seems a little odd too, it is just kind of tacked on, he doesnt get turned on by it she isnt there... it just seems out of place.

Personally i would have found it a much more exciting story if the strippers came along too, and both of them were used as sextoys. Or even if the wife came back and thanked her husband, the way it is now leaves me feeling sad for him and angry that he is so weak. I was buying the whole thing right up untill she left, i could see how he could be turned on by that, but her leaving killed it for me.

The other way it might have worked would be to tell it from her perspective, that way we dont get left behind also, the way it is we dont know what happened so it leaves the reader feeling a little left out.

I hope this isnt too personal, i thought it was pretty well done, just not as rich as it could have been

 

[MLyons]

Well, I tried.

I read to the point where Rachel cums at the hands of her husband and Crystal, and then the other guys joined in, and I lost interest really fast. I just skimmed the rest.

I certainly don't think that the comments that you cited were fair or appropriate, and I can appreciate your frustration.

For me (and this is just me) the story started out quite interesting. I'm afraid I had issues with the events and how they unfolded, and especially some of the motivations involved. It just seemed all thrown together to me, without any real thought put into what Rachel was thinking, what her husband was thinking, and most of all what the management of the strip club was thinking. I'm not saying there isn't something to be said for fantasy, but there wasn't enough here in terms of interest for me to just go with the flow. I really did like the initiail lap dance, but I would have preferred if it had been done in the private room, where there was a connection between the husband and the wife, and a connection between the wife and the stripper, and playing more with the dynamics of those three people, and what made Rachel orgasm. More on that would have been fascinating to me. The addition of the other two hooligans after that just ended up annoying me to no end--there was just no soul there--not that there couldn't have been. I just didn't have enough feelings or motivations to go on.

Anyway, the writing is fine, and went down pretty easily. I REALLY missed seeing any dialogue from Rachel though. There was practically none. She might as well have been a blow-up doll most of the time. She just didn't do anything, and neither did the husband really, excpet take orders from these idiots.

I don't know. I'm being harsh, and my comments are also betraying my interest in a story that you dearly had no intention of writing, so they're probably not useful to you. The good news is that your writing was good enough that I didn't notice it, and I'm commenting on the story and characters rather than any flaws in how you presented them.

Cuckold stories just aren't for me, most of the time. Anyway, take what you like from this. Ignore what you don't, but I do hope this satisfies some of your desire for more substantive commentary on your story.

One thing I will say, judging by this sampling, I might be interested in reading some of your other writing, depending on the category and themes...

 

[mxslicer]

If you read the public comments of other cuckholding type stories, then you will see very similar comments to the ones in your post. I have no idea why other than some people have a really deep hatred of these types of stories. I wouldn't take it personally.

Edited to fix some typos.

 

[hotchkiss]

If like me you write for your own pleasure then take these comments with a pinch of salt. I know my stories don't appeal to all but they are mine.

Constructive criticism is good and I welcome it but not downright slagging off isnt worth reading.

Dont let the arsewipes get to you, hone your skills and dive back in!

All the best
HK

 

[Mistress Blue]

Thank you for your feedback, spyro.

i think i see why peole have some trouble with this one. It isnt poorly written. The caricters do seem a little emotionaly shallow, they dont seem to have any feelings. Your protaginist mentions that he is being humilliated but he doesnt leave, do anything about it, or explain why he isnt leaving or doing anything.

This story was the fifth chapter of the series. In the beginning I tried to paint a picture of what Ben and Rachel's marriage was like. In the first chapter, Rachel finds Ben's stash of porn and some of the items are cuckholding stories and movies. Ben is interested in being humiliated as long as he is "forced" into it.

I disagree with you that Ben is weak. He and Rachel are the ones in control of the situation, not the two mindless jerks.
You shouldn't feel sorry for someone who is getting what they want. As for the peeing, that is another humiliation for Ben and the thought of his wife being used by other men even if he is not present is a huge turn on for him. Perhaps I should have elaborated more upon that.

 

[Mistress Blue]

MLyons, I really love the word "hooligans" I wish I had used it.

I entertained the thought of the lap dance in a private room, but that went against Rachel's exhibition fantasy.

The story went from living out Rachel's fantasy to living out Ben's fantasy and Rachel was a willing participant. I wrote the story from Ben's point of view, therefore, it was difficult to interject Rachel's thoughts.

The management of the strip club did throw them out. They were publically having sex and distracting other patrons from the dancers.

I appreciate your comments even though the story wasn't for you.

 

[americandemon]

How's that saying go????

You can please some of the people some of the time but not all the people all the time. Feedback is like that! Your never going to please everyone with a story. So, just roll with the punches Blue. I had a story a while back I wrote called Cunt in a SUV. Oh boy did I hear from people on that one!!! They were calling me a rapist wanna be! LOL The only reason I wrote the story was becuase my editor made a comment about how my nonconsent stories were not very realistic. I didn't like the story but proved I could be realistic with it. I had it removed a while back. Point is even if you hit the story right on the head.....someone will always be there to say you missed.

Write what you want! Write what you feel!

Take Care Blue
Demon

 

[Reverse_Cowboy]

Glad to see I'm not the only one.

I also get very frustrated by nasty comments people leave on the public comment board or send as feedback without even bothering to put their name or email address to it.

I also agree with you 100% that if you don't like a certain type of story, then don't read it. I notice a lot of people make nasty comments on cuckold stories, caling them "Just another wimp husband story." ect. Well if you don't like that type of story why read it? Almost every cuckold story is clearly labeled as such or makes it clear in the description.

The fact that most if not all of these people don't even leave you a way to respond or defend yourself and or your story shows a lot about them if you ask me.

I bet most of the people of do this type of thing have never even written a story themselves, and if they have it probably got a very low rating.

On the other hand I am very thankful to all those readers who have left me positive comments about my own stories. I find it very encouraging.

 

[vargas111]

I get them too!

I wish there weree a way not to allow comments from people that do not give a way of wrting back.

However, look at the bright side. The author's words produced a really strong emotion in a reader. What power!!

 

[JGUK2004]

Hi Mistress

I'm afraid there are a few people out there who get kicks from sending abuse - usually anonymous - to authors. I've had a few myself and have found the best cure to be the 'delete' key.

I have ticked the 'no anonymous feedback' box to try and cure this, but some still seems to get through.

Don't let it get to you. And remember to thank all who give genuine feedback. I for one find it really encouraging.

JG

 

[BlackShanglan]

If wishes were ... well, me

I wish there was a way to respond to comments. I don't want to stoop to voting / rating my own work, but at times I would really enjoy having a dialog with the people who write comments - sort of a public chat. Yes, I know, there are bulletin boards for that, but it would be nice for the author to be able to interact in the public comments section - ask questions, solicit advice, whatever.

Shanglan

 

[MlledeLaPlumeBleu]

Hey 'Demon-

Turns out all I had a problem with was the title phrasing. Who knew?

"A Cunt in An SUV", please!

Violent rape deserves good grammar!

X_miss blue pen

 

[ferociouskittycat]

Hey 'Demon-

Turns out all I had a problem with was the title phrasing. Who knew?

"A Cunt in An SUV", please!

Violent rape deserves good grammar!

X_miss blue pen

A E I O U.... an an before a sounding vowel, or up your ass shove a trowel.

Sheesh, didn't you know that?

LOL

 

[redice]

I feel your pain, why do people write such horrid comments. I have also posted one of my first attempts to gauge my writing ability to some of the truly excellent work, I have seen here.

What amazed me was the negative anonymous comments to my story have escalated into a childish cussing battle between anonymous postings of who can holler the loudest. Almost to the humorous point, that they have forgotten about the story, and are trying to satisfy their individual ego’s.

I ignore most of the nasty ones, and treasure the valid comments of my work. I even read some of the work of the commenting authors and was able to gather valuable insight to their remarks.

I found your story very easy to read with good flow. Your ability is definitely there. Don’t give in to the few who can’t see beyond strangling their own manhood.

 

[spyro1123]

Thanks for the clarification, actually i think i would have liked the story if he had masturbated thinking about the two guys with his wife or in some way shown his approval.

Well i am off to read the rest of the series to see how they got to this point. Stories like these are like car crashes for me i dont want to look but for some reason i always do.

Thanks for the reply its nice to know people actually read what i write.

 

[Wyatt]

I've got a few stories posted on Lit. I've been here for a few years now. Nasty feedback? Had tonnes...laugh it off ! Latest was some kind of devil worhip incantation nonsense. Very amusing. I write nonconsent so it goes with the territory. As a nonconsent writer I would like to point out that 80% of my feedback is from females and about half of those request their own stories. Different strokes for different folks and all that.

 

[Mistress Blue]

My thanks to all.

Thanks to all who posted comments in here and for your support. It's nice to know that I'm not the only one who becomes frustrated with negativity.

To Spyro:

I loved the train wreck comment. I'm still laughing.

See?

I value all my positive (and not so positive) feedback and make sure to respond to those who took the time to give it. I still appreciate any comments that may help improve my writing. I would also be interested in suggestions for storylines.

Thanks again.

 

[JCSTREET]

It's nothing to do with your story (which I've skimmed)

These are trolls who simply delight in hassling--or sometimes people with mental issues - you're always going to have a residue of that

Consider how a real editor of erotica/porn would talk to you in an actual publishing house--clearly none of those epithets would ever come into the conversation

feedback like that can feel traumatic - but it's not real - the more you're in the public eye the more you'll have to cope with that sort of thing - but it is nothing to do with you

good luck

Carl

I have recently posted my latest story of a series Who Says Marriage is Dull Ch. 5

I have received some nasty email in regards to this story. For example:

"one more AIDS spreading slimy slutwhorewife story...sigh"

HELLO, you're reading internet porn! How many of the stories here promote the use of condoms? They are fantasy not reality. I don't write anything to get people to run out and have unprotected sex with strangers.

Another wrote:

"A woman that writes this...thing...must sure be a real lowlife."

This coming from someone cruising a porn site.

My story was listed in the Fetish Category and the description said "Ben takes Rachel to Las Vegas and ends up a cuckhold"

Was there really a lot of gray area in that? If someone finds this content distasteful or offensive, why do they bother to click on the story to begin with?

I just don't understand. If someone finds pornography offensive, then they don't belong here in the first place. If they were looking for romance and tender kisses...they picked the wrong category.

Considering that in the first email every other word was misspelled, I immediately knew this comment must have come from Einstein.

None of this was very constructive. I don't believe that the story is written poorly, but I can't be sure because the only thing these anonymous emails mentioned was content.

I take exception to being called a lowlife. Is this world such a sad place that people with nothing better to do just insult others to make themselves feel better?

I would definitely appreciate some
constructive feedback even if the content is not your cup of tea.

Thanks to all.

 

[The Erotic Avenger]

Mistress,

I agree with one of the earlier posters. I get angry at stories where the husband wusses out. But this is your story and I say fuck them if they can't take a joke. While it may not be my cup of tea, it is well written and you have every right to post it. I really hate those cowards who post anonymously. Look at it this way, when they have the guts to sign their names to their criticism then their criticism will carry weight.

Besides, if you are like most writers on this site, you aren't writing for accolades, although they are appreciated. You are writing to vent your creativity and no anonymous coward's comment can take that away.

Keep up the good work.

Greg

 

[MagicFingers]

I just got this one

Was good, but could have been much better. "Safe sex" comment at the end got you a '1'/00!

 

[BlackShanglan]

Re: I just got this one

Was good, but could have been much better.

Ah yes, nothing like nice, precise, actionable feedback. Thank goodness, now I know exactly what to fix ...

Shanglan

 

[Donna Williams]

Similar comments

I published a cuck story "Hotwives" and got similar derogatory comments. The emails were entirely supportive though. Constructive critism is good, so I just ignor the derogatory ones.

Maybe the story hit too close to home for some of the readers? Or they got thered jolly's off and thenwere angered by it.

 

[H piltdown]

The first story I had published here was done on a dare. The objective was to illicit those intolerant remarks. The story worked magnificently. We had dozens of e-mails that were so derogatory that they supplied us with some really hearty laughs. Since then, we've mostly tried to push the boundaries of the status quo in one element or another.

There are many stories we've read here that were well written and flow easily, but never received a little red or green square. On the other hand, there's many stories with the red squares that we've found boring, poorly written or too vanilla to enjoy.

It all depends on what the folks that click on those voting numbers want to see more of.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Yes, I am amazed at the number of people who seem to make a profession out of leaving chagrined remarks in those genres. I can't help thinking that much of it is the work of a single individual; either that or more people than I realize habitually misspell "wimpy" as "whimpy." I can't imagine anything more tedious than repeatedly reading stories of a genre I know I dislike and then leaving ranting, misspelled complaints - but evidently someone can.

Shanglan