My wicked ideas... what I want to do with my 'bed'!!!

TheCaptain

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Hey to all :D

This is a little incest idea I've been thinkin about of late, inspired by that saucy minx, BedtimeStories, whos my darlin' 'older sis' :)

It revolves around a young man and his older sister. The man is about 20, the sister 27-28. The guy has shortcropped dark brown, almost black hair, the woman dark brown. She likes to wear sexy bright red lipstick, all the time, even around the house with little or no reason to. She also has a fondness for stockings and sexy high heels..

The guy comes home one friday night after an hour - supposedly he was going to be on a date with his girlfriend for quite some time, but he comes home much earlier than expected. He stumbles into the lounge room and collapses onto the couch, soon crying his eyes out. Sis comes down from upstairs wearing skimpy nightgown, wondering what the matter is with her lil bro. She loves him dearly, though they fight constantly and always seem at each others throats they both know they are birds of a feather, and they would do anything to protect the other from the hurts of the world...

Bro tells sis about his girlfriend, and how he had come to pick her up to learn from her that she was dumping him for another man.... for one of his closest friends, no less. He cries and cries, and sis, knowing the pain of a recent breakup herself, wraps her arms around him and holds him close.

It takes baby bro a while, but soon he notices that she is scantily clothed, and soon enough, his body begins to react to being so close to such a barely-dressed beauty. He's always loved his sister a little bit more than was appropriate, had alwyas had deep feelings for her, feelings that he knew were wrong and had to be concealed... now, though he felt his control slipping away. He just had to have comfort, and now, in his current state of mine, he was feeling quite fatalistic.

It was time to go for broke. To find out if sis held any deepseeded lusts of her own for him to share....


Okay, thats it for now. Just a preliminary idea. I know I know, somewhat bland and predictible, done to death prob... but its real late here, damnit! :p

Thougths/suggestions/encouragements? Ideas and concepts that could improve upon this seedling notion would be greatly appreciated

Capt
 
It may be "done to death", I don't know. I haven't really read the Incest category before. I think it sounds like a nice "romantic" tale, though set between siblings! :D
 
BedtimeStories said:
It may be "done to death", I don't know. I haven't really read the Incest category before. I think it sounds like a nice "romantic" tale, though set between siblings! :D
Yes :) I'm sort of in agreement, but the siblings aspect rules out any other category I would think

I'd get fried if I put it in romance, I'm dead sure of that

Capt
 
BedtimeStories said:
lol Well, I don't want my baby bro to get hurt. ;)
rofl yes, double emphasis on the hurtin

Ahh I'll see how it goes with this idea :), I might just incorporate someone like yourself into my next work somehow, whatever it is cause I really dont have any good ideas at the mo....

Capt
 
I actually have read quite a few stories starting with this sortof premise in the incest category...
But, I'm sure there are ways you can figure out how to make it unique. :)
 
bisexplicit said:
I actually have read quite a few stories starting with this sortof premise in the incest category...
But, I'm sure there are ways you can figure out how to make it unique. :)
yes tru there are MANY out there along the same lines... any suggestions for originality?
 
TheCaptain said:
yes tru there are MANY out there along the same lines... any suggestions for originality?

The only suggestion I can think of right off the bat to make it something kindof unique is to have it be that he was /pretending/ to have been dumped as a ruse to get into bed with her.
But, what I always ask myself before I write anything is...would someone actually do that? I'm not sure if my own idea passes my test, hehe.
 
bisexplicit said:
The only suggestion I can think of right off the bat to make it something kindof unique is to have it be that he was /pretending/ to have been dumped as a ruse to get into bed with her.
But, what I always ask myself before I write anything is...would someone actually do that? I'm not sure if my own idea passes my test, hehe.
well in MY opinion, incest is more like would somebody WANT to do this... and, thou bed aint a relative, I DEFINITELY would like to get more aqquainted :)

So flip that into incest and there we go :p. Very good idea too, me likes... :)

Capt
 
TheCaptain said:
well in MY opinion, incest is more like would somebody WANT to do this... and, thou bed aint a relative, I DEFINITELY would like to get more aqquainted :)

So flip that into incest and there we go :p. Very good idea too, me likes... :)

Capt

*shrugs* I /want/ to do a lot of things, and I think other people do, too...but for me, the question is, would you do them? Thats what makes a story believable to me.
Then again, sometimes it is nice to see the characters doing things that you would like to do, and don't have the guts to. :) (Although, no, I am not talking about incest now...ewwy eww.)
 
bisexplicit said:
*shrugs* I /want/ to do a lot of things, and I think other people do, too...but for me, the question is, would you do them? Thats what makes a story believable to me.
Then again, sometimes it is nice to see the characters doing things that you would like to do, and don't have the guts to. :) (Although, no, I am not talking about incest now...ewwy eww.)
different strokes for different folks :D
 
I've pretended to be dumped to bed a different guy. ;)

I even once pretended to dump a guy to get him to bed me, though that one wasn't as much fun as I would have liked. :(

Captain you don't have to make bed your sister, you can just have her as a roommate or neighbor that just happens to like wearing the things you mention in breif public trips. ;)

I'm sure you have really thin apartment walls there to, some places you sneeze and your neighbors say excuse you. :rolleyes:
 
emap said:
I've pretended to be dumped to bed a different guy. ;)

I even once pretended to dump a guy to get him to bed me, though that one wasn't as much fun as I would have liked. :(

Captain you don't have to make bed your sister, you can just have her as a roommate or neighbor that just happens to like wearing the things you mention in breif public trips. ;)

I'm sure you have really thin apartment walls there to, some places you sneeze and your neighbors say excuse you. :rolleyes:
The roommate idea does sound interesting, and seems more plausible... consoling sex. I've had some of that before, and it's a very nice way to get over someone, I know...! :)
 
TheCaptain said:
emap said:
Captain you don't have to make bed your sister, you can just have her as a roommate or neighbor that just happens to like wearing the things you mention in breif public trips. ;)
The roommate idea does sound interesting, and seems more plausible... consoling sex. I've had some of that before, and it's a very nice way to get over someone, I know...! :)


The roommate idea may be more plausable, but I know why Capt said "sister". He's a pervie!! :D



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YAY no more nose picking. :nana:

Now if only he would stop looking so sad. :p :devil:
 
I bet even homer would be happy if say perhaps me and bed came over tied him to his bed and took turns riding him. ;) :devil:
 
emap said:
I bet even homer would be happy if say perhaps me and bed came over tied him to his bed and took turns riding him. ;) :devil:
I'm sure he would... I know I would! :p
 
Oh but I wasn't talking about doing that with you, just homer, you pick your nose. :p :nana:
 
Silly, silly people here. :eek:

I think Capt needs some tickling to make Homer cheer up.

Or do we need some beer and doughnuts?
 
Don't forget a nap on the hammock without Flanders dropping by with a 'Hidely ho good neighbor.' :catgrin:
 
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