MasterofUnlocking
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This is my first submission to literotica! This is the rough draft of my story. It's two short chapters long for now. Please let me know what you think!
Chapter one:
It was the middle of the night in a small, quiet and obscure town. The sky was dark with that tinge of blue when the moon is nowhere in sight but has spread it's light far enough that you can see it. Talbern stood in the back yard of his rather small and bare bones house. The only thing one could stretch to say was a luxury about the house was a porch in the back. Mind you it was a small one with no fence or rails or anything. Just a wooden platform preventing you from touching the grass. The house itself was a dull grey especially being covered in the dark of the quiet night. Overall not very impressive, but not quite a dump either.
Talbern was doing what he usually did at night, reflecting. On himself, society, love. You know the type, the philosophical loner. Not that he was without humour. You see Talbern fancied himself a cynic. Once an idealist, but that was shattered when he saw the world and how corrupt and evil it can be. Talbern hated the world. But he always maintained a sense of humour and held on to his own personal ideals. Because of this Talbern had always felt separate from the world and society.
When he was a child he would try to make friend's with the other kids, but inevitably he would encounter something he thought was unfair or unjust. He was never one to let evil go unpunished having grown up on Power Ranger's and Batman cartoons and so the other children pushed him away. He was often isolated because of his anger and his somewhat over energetic attitude. He would get a little too rough when playing soccer or dodgeball or hockey. He wasn't trying to be mean, but he was passionate and energetic. Often manifesting as competitiveness.
Talbern had few social connections. He was close with his family but rarely saw them, because of his tendency toward isolation. But that was how he liked it. He didn't get along with most people because of his sense of humour and his introspective nature. Most people thought he was being rude by not making conversation or by making a snide remark about some celebrity divorce story. But he was actually just the type to prefer thoughtful and interesting conversation. If that wasn't on the table he preferred to be left to think on his own.
Talbern was recently fired because of an outburst he had at his janitorial position at the local 7/11. His boss accused him of not cleaning the bathrooms correctly, having missed a spot on the wall. At first Talbern just let it go, but his boss was eager to fight him on it. A shouting match ensued witch always sent Talbern into a black out rage! He had gotten better control over the years and so was able to keep his cool just enough to walk out before anything violent happened.
Without a job and without any backup plan all he could say was "Shit."
Chapter two:
It was a quiet night for the sisters Marian and Sophia. They had just moved into a new house after a rather intense problem with their father.
Their parent's always fought, (usually it was about their fathers late hours) and Marian hated how much it hurt her sister Sophia. So this last time she finally had had it! She had just started packing her and Sophia's things when her father discovered them. He was furious! He screamed "Fuck you! I provide for this family all that they need, and noone appreciates it around here!" But Marian did appreciate what he did, just not the way he screamed and yelled all the time. Sophia felt much the same way but being a much more timid and quiet person she could never deal with her fathers outbursts. She often would fall asleep on a tear soaked pillow. Whenever Marian thought she could get away with it, she would sneak into Sophia's bed to comfort her. Eventually their father got so exhausted from screaming he fell flat on his bed. Marian took this as her cue to get Sophia out of the house. Their mother being a real estate agent let Marian buy a cheap house she had. Of course she had to empty out her entire life saving's to do so.
Their first night in their very own new house. The house was empty on the inside, except the few boxes of unpacked thing's. They had only two sleeping bags from the times when they would go camping. Times when their family was much happier. Times when they could laugh and enjoy each others company. Sophia was fast asleep, but Marian couldn't even close her eyes.
She quietly stepped outside to get some air. As she crossed the creaky threshold of the door, the sound calling out to an empty sky, the material of her greyish/purple pajama pant's slid across her clitorous in just the right way to make her really horny. At first she pushed the idea aside reasoning this was a poor time to have such feelings. But then she thought; "This is a perfect time to get off! I need to relieve this stress!" So she went back inside to grab her sleeping bag. Being careful not to wake her sister she quietly grabbed her bag. Sophia moved just a little, Marian feared she may have woken her baby sister but she quickly realized otherwise. Marian couldn't help but sigh in appreciation of her little sister's adorable sleeping face. She saw the face of a woman not unlike herself. Soft, pale skin, long brown hair. They both had a slightly gothic look although they don't really try to look as such. Marian always envied Sophia's bright green eyes. She thought they were just the most mesmerizing feature she could imagine. She on the other hand had deep blue eyes, inherited from her uncle on her fathers side. They both had feature's similar to Alison Brie from the community TV series albeit with a slightly thinner face. Marian breaking from her trance finally took her bag outside and spread it out under the deep, dark night sky.
She crouched down on the balls of her feet and leaned slowly onto her back. Not exactly comfortable but more than adequate. She took a breath of the moist night air into her lungs. Her heart already beating in anticipation of the stimulation to come. She brought her hands up to her 32 B cup breasts. Her nipples were erect and she loved to roll her finger tips over them. She took a sharp breath in after catching a really good spot, she also noticed she was getting ever so slightly wet. She thought to herself as she chuckled, "My body is ready." Slowly she reached down to her now very wet vagina, savoring each movement and each touch on her increasingly warm body. Her hands slid under the top of her pant's and she lightly touched her clit with her long middle finger. It sent a quick surge of pleasure through her body. "Shit, I'm never this sensitive." She thought. After letting herself calm a bit she again resumed sliding her finger over her clit. Rubbing first in circle's which sent slow but increasingly powerful waves of pleasure up her spine. Then moving her finger side to side and up and down. This was almost too much for her, she breathed in sharply and nearly climaxed right there. But she let herself come down a bit and then went back to it. Lowering her hand to her vagina lips, she slid her fingers up and down her lips before spreading them apart and pushing her fingers through. A wave of intense pleasure hit her and she nearly screamed out, her body quivered as she adjusted to her fingers being inside of her. She touched her inner walls feeling the soft, wet flesh and moved her finger toward her trusty g-spot. She took extra care to be gentle seeing as how she was so sensitive right now. Lightly, she brought her finger tip to her g-spot and placed pressure on it. She bit her lower lip a little and drew a quick breath. She hadn't had such good luck masturbating in a long time! As she thought this she felt slightly guilty again but remembered how she need to get rid of some of this stress and continued on. She took her finger and pressed harder on her g-spot sending a strong surge of pleasure straight to her spine forcing her to arch her back, as she did this she saw her beautiful sister in the doorway.
"Shit!" She yelled, but by then she had gone too far and she burst into a powerful orgasm. She tried to stop and to hide herself but it was very hard when she was having such an intense orgasm. Marian was still vaguely entranced by it, but she tried to talk and explain to her sister. Bad idea. "Hey I was just itching myself." She tried to explain, but ended up more quietly and orgasmically mumbling. Her sister giggled. "It's okay, I know what you were really doing." Marian blushed hard. "Oh ummm, heh. Well what did you want little sis?" "I just noticed you were gone and I really need to be close with you right now. ... Marian? I'm really scared." Marian gave her sister a strong hug and said, "I love you Sophia." Sophia burst into tears, that was just what she needed to hear right now. Their embrace was cut short by the sound of the neighbors door shutting rather loudly. A little spooked they went back inside and tried to get some sleep.
This is just the first two chapters of a probably 6-8 chapter story. I may depending on the feedback I get change a few things. So again please let me know what you think, and thank you in advance!
Chapter one:
It was the middle of the night in a small, quiet and obscure town. The sky was dark with that tinge of blue when the moon is nowhere in sight but has spread it's light far enough that you can see it. Talbern stood in the back yard of his rather small and bare bones house. The only thing one could stretch to say was a luxury about the house was a porch in the back. Mind you it was a small one with no fence or rails or anything. Just a wooden platform preventing you from touching the grass. The house itself was a dull grey especially being covered in the dark of the quiet night. Overall not very impressive, but not quite a dump either.
Talbern was doing what he usually did at night, reflecting. On himself, society, love. You know the type, the philosophical loner. Not that he was without humour. You see Talbern fancied himself a cynic. Once an idealist, but that was shattered when he saw the world and how corrupt and evil it can be. Talbern hated the world. But he always maintained a sense of humour and held on to his own personal ideals. Because of this Talbern had always felt separate from the world and society.
When he was a child he would try to make friend's with the other kids, but inevitably he would encounter something he thought was unfair or unjust. He was never one to let evil go unpunished having grown up on Power Ranger's and Batman cartoons and so the other children pushed him away. He was often isolated because of his anger and his somewhat over energetic attitude. He would get a little too rough when playing soccer or dodgeball or hockey. He wasn't trying to be mean, but he was passionate and energetic. Often manifesting as competitiveness.
Talbern had few social connections. He was close with his family but rarely saw them, because of his tendency toward isolation. But that was how he liked it. He didn't get along with most people because of his sense of humour and his introspective nature. Most people thought he was being rude by not making conversation or by making a snide remark about some celebrity divorce story. But he was actually just the type to prefer thoughtful and interesting conversation. If that wasn't on the table he preferred to be left to think on his own.
Talbern was recently fired because of an outburst he had at his janitorial position at the local 7/11. His boss accused him of not cleaning the bathrooms correctly, having missed a spot on the wall. At first Talbern just let it go, but his boss was eager to fight him on it. A shouting match ensued witch always sent Talbern into a black out rage! He had gotten better control over the years and so was able to keep his cool just enough to walk out before anything violent happened.
Without a job and without any backup plan all he could say was "Shit."
Chapter two:
It was a quiet night for the sisters Marian and Sophia. They had just moved into a new house after a rather intense problem with their father.
Their parent's always fought, (usually it was about their fathers late hours) and Marian hated how much it hurt her sister Sophia. So this last time she finally had had it! She had just started packing her and Sophia's things when her father discovered them. He was furious! He screamed "Fuck you! I provide for this family all that they need, and noone appreciates it around here!" But Marian did appreciate what he did, just not the way he screamed and yelled all the time. Sophia felt much the same way but being a much more timid and quiet person she could never deal with her fathers outbursts. She often would fall asleep on a tear soaked pillow. Whenever Marian thought she could get away with it, she would sneak into Sophia's bed to comfort her. Eventually their father got so exhausted from screaming he fell flat on his bed. Marian took this as her cue to get Sophia out of the house. Their mother being a real estate agent let Marian buy a cheap house she had. Of course she had to empty out her entire life saving's to do so.
Their first night in their very own new house. The house was empty on the inside, except the few boxes of unpacked thing's. They had only two sleeping bags from the times when they would go camping. Times when their family was much happier. Times when they could laugh and enjoy each others company. Sophia was fast asleep, but Marian couldn't even close her eyes.
She quietly stepped outside to get some air. As she crossed the creaky threshold of the door, the sound calling out to an empty sky, the material of her greyish/purple pajama pant's slid across her clitorous in just the right way to make her really horny. At first she pushed the idea aside reasoning this was a poor time to have such feelings. But then she thought; "This is a perfect time to get off! I need to relieve this stress!" So she went back inside to grab her sleeping bag. Being careful not to wake her sister she quietly grabbed her bag. Sophia moved just a little, Marian feared she may have woken her baby sister but she quickly realized otherwise. Marian couldn't help but sigh in appreciation of her little sister's adorable sleeping face. She saw the face of a woman not unlike herself. Soft, pale skin, long brown hair. They both had a slightly gothic look although they don't really try to look as such. Marian always envied Sophia's bright green eyes. She thought they were just the most mesmerizing feature she could imagine. She on the other hand had deep blue eyes, inherited from her uncle on her fathers side. They both had feature's similar to Alison Brie from the community TV series albeit with a slightly thinner face. Marian breaking from her trance finally took her bag outside and spread it out under the deep, dark night sky.
She crouched down on the balls of her feet and leaned slowly onto her back. Not exactly comfortable but more than adequate. She took a breath of the moist night air into her lungs. Her heart already beating in anticipation of the stimulation to come. She brought her hands up to her 32 B cup breasts. Her nipples were erect and she loved to roll her finger tips over them. She took a sharp breath in after catching a really good spot, she also noticed she was getting ever so slightly wet. She thought to herself as she chuckled, "My body is ready." Slowly she reached down to her now very wet vagina, savoring each movement and each touch on her increasingly warm body. Her hands slid under the top of her pant's and she lightly touched her clit with her long middle finger. It sent a quick surge of pleasure through her body. "Shit, I'm never this sensitive." She thought. After letting herself calm a bit she again resumed sliding her finger over her clit. Rubbing first in circle's which sent slow but increasingly powerful waves of pleasure up her spine. Then moving her finger side to side and up and down. This was almost too much for her, she breathed in sharply and nearly climaxed right there. But she let herself come down a bit and then went back to it. Lowering her hand to her vagina lips, she slid her fingers up and down her lips before spreading them apart and pushing her fingers through. A wave of intense pleasure hit her and she nearly screamed out, her body quivered as she adjusted to her fingers being inside of her. She touched her inner walls feeling the soft, wet flesh and moved her finger toward her trusty g-spot. She took extra care to be gentle seeing as how she was so sensitive right now. Lightly, she brought her finger tip to her g-spot and placed pressure on it. She bit her lower lip a little and drew a quick breath. She hadn't had such good luck masturbating in a long time! As she thought this she felt slightly guilty again but remembered how she need to get rid of some of this stress and continued on. She took her finger and pressed harder on her g-spot sending a strong surge of pleasure straight to her spine forcing her to arch her back, as she did this she saw her beautiful sister in the doorway.
"Shit!" She yelled, but by then she had gone too far and she burst into a powerful orgasm. She tried to stop and to hide herself but it was very hard when she was having such an intense orgasm. Marian was still vaguely entranced by it, but she tried to talk and explain to her sister. Bad idea. "Hey I was just itching myself." She tried to explain, but ended up more quietly and orgasmically mumbling. Her sister giggled. "It's okay, I know what you were really doing." Marian blushed hard. "Oh ummm, heh. Well what did you want little sis?" "I just noticed you were gone and I really need to be close with you right now. ... Marian? I'm really scared." Marian gave her sister a strong hug and said, "I love you Sophia." Sophia burst into tears, that was just what she needed to hear right now. Their embrace was cut short by the sound of the neighbors door shutting rather loudly. A little spooked they went back inside and tried to get some sleep.
This is just the first two chapters of a probably 6-8 chapter story. I may depending on the feedback I get change a few things. So again please let me know what you think, and thank you in advance!
