My Turn To Plead....

[_Lynn_]

This is the thing...normally I don't like to draw attention to My work. But in just a little under three weeks, lit has posted 5 stories and 2 poems of Mine. Now I need comments, feedback, etc. "The Gardener Is The New Neighbor", My first, is in the erotic-couplings, while the one posted today, "I Was The Third", fits into group-sex. I hope some of you can find a few minutes to check them out for Me. Thank you!!!

 

[CeriseNoire]

Including links to your stories will encourage more people to read them.

 

[_Lynn_]

Including links to your stories will encourage more people to read them.

Too true....that's what I get for doing this in the middle of the night...thank you for correcting Me! And I believe these are the links needed........

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=297543

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=300277

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=300138

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=298684

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=298346

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=300357

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=300118

 

[SakuraNeko]

a few of your stories

Beautiful writing, and I do agree with the previous post, make your stories more accessable and people will read them It does take time however b/c many readers only visit every so often and only read a few stories each time, But your stories are wonderful and I am sure you will get plenty of feedback soon enough BTW I especially loved your lead into to the other stories, very catching...

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Including links to your stories will encourage more people to read them.

You owe me dry-cleaning bills as I've just splurted coffee over my jacket laughing.

How quick you have joined the 'egos on legs' club.

 

[Arafura]

I read and commented!

 

[CeriseNoire]

You owe me dry-cleaning bills as I've just splurted coffee over my jacket laughing.

How quick you have joined the 'egos on legs' club.

Hehe, that's right. Here I am acting like I've been here forever
But really, it's more that I'm terribly lazy.

As for MistressLynn, I just read the first of your stories. I liked the plot, I liked the twist ending, but I thought the sex was a bit rushed. I would have liked some kind of transition and more buildup.

 

[_Lynn_]

Re:Comments

Thank you all for taking the time to read My stories. "The Gardener.." is one of the first I ever wrote, back in Nov. 2006.

You have given Me some interesting and insightful comments that I will put into use. I hope you notice an improvement from any forthcoming efforts. Please continue reading and commenting.

 

[sethp]

very nice!