M Mrbig Virgin Joined Mar 27, 2001 Posts 1 May 28, 2001 #1 Could I have some feedback on my story please. Its called "A Yearning" in the Loving wives section. Thanks
Could I have some feedback on my story please. Its called "A Yearning" in the Loving wives section. Thanks
CelticsHeart Really Experienced Joined May 8, 2001 Posts 169 May 28, 2001 #2 Offers up a link.... MrBig, I copied your link yo part two of your story, it helps the virgins umong us to get to it. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12024 I read your work and it was an easy read, but you left me feeling, well just feeling as it happens. I`d love it if you`d take the story further in, perhaps write a little more in each episode. OK ! maybe I am just a greedy girlie. Hugs, CH
Offers up a link.... MrBig, I copied your link yo part two of your story, it helps the virgins umong us to get to it. http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12024 I read your work and it was an easy read, but you left me feeling, well just feeling as it happens. I`d love it if you`d take the story further in, perhaps write a little more in each episode. OK ! maybe I am just a greedy girlie. Hugs, CH