My story

Mrbig

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Could I have some feedback on my story please. Its called "A Yearning" in the Loving wives section. Thanks
 
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MrBig,

I copied your link yo part two of your story, it helps the virgins umong us to get to it.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=12024

I read your work and it was an easy read, but you left me feeling, well just feeling as it happens. I`d love it if you`d take the story further in, perhaps write a little more in each episode. OK ! maybe I am just a greedy girlie.

Hugs,
CH
 
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