My story

[jennytobe]

I have uploaded here, my story is waiting to approved
Would love to know your opinions About it
If you can read and let me know
Would love it
Thank you
An Indian crossdresser here would love to chat with other cds

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[annabellebrito]

Good story. The glue, the dresses the blackmail was great. Love how Mr Thomas breaks down Josie. The body language was also great. Good use of it.

 

[jennytobe]

Thank you Annabelle
Finally my first feedback

 

[annabellebrito]

Thank you Annabelle
Finally my first feedback

I also forgot, love the 1950 dresses. That was very good. Shows you understand the level of conservativism in retro American femininity and submission. Only little criticisms is you could have added a bit more context at the start. A little more details on the blackmail material. And added a bit more condensending groping from Mr Thomas, like a slap on the butt. But Im enjoying it.

 

[jennytobe]

Yea the start is a bit dry and short felt it too now
My first story will try to improve

 

[annabellebrito]

Yea the start is a bit dry and short felt it too now
My first story will try to improve

Good. I do like how you cut to the point, but you just need a little detail here and there. Let me know if you ever need some feedback. Feminization is my main genre.

 

[Dreamerman77]

Nice story, I liked it... though it was short. I don't want to be rude or mean, but the sentence structure feels like AI written. I hope you didn't use it to create the story, since it most likely will be rejected.

 

[lovecraft68]

That link is not to a Literotica story so I have a feeling its going to be removed.

 

[jennytobe]

Good. I do like how you cut to the point, but you just need a little detail here and there. Let me know if you ever need some feedback. Feminization is my main genre.

Did you read my latest part
Let me know how was it
What other forced Feminization and MASCULINITY breaking things can be done?

 

[jennytobe]

Nice story, I liked it... though it was short. I don't want to be rude or mean, but the sentence structure feels like AI written. I hope you didn't use it to create the story, since it most likely will be rejected.

Am trying to bud it but running out ideas of forced Feminization tasks
Oh is it
Not completely I had few helps thru AI just wanted to keep the story in a proper flow, I didn't know it would do intricately checked maybe I'll have to change
Thank you for letting me know