My story idea

[sexkit-teen]

ok so this is the basic idea of a story i have been thinking of writing
young girl seduces 2 of her daddy's freinds into double teaming her. unknown to her, her father catches them but doesn't them know. then when confronted she seduces daddy as well. thats the basic plot. what do you think? any suggestions?

 

[bisexplicit]

Make sure the "young girl" is over eighteen.

And don't forget to take advantage of the editing program available.

Good luck writing your story.

 

[pantone]

ok so this is the basic idea of a story i have been thinking of writing
young girl seduces 2 of her daddy's freinds into double teaming her. unknown to her, her father catches them but doesn't them know. then when confronted she seduces daddy as well. thats the basic plot. what do you think? any suggestions?

love that idea. does the girl take on her daddy alone or along with the other 2 guys? i think it would be sexier if she first took on her daddy alone, and then maybe the 2 friends joined in after he came.. ?

 

[DCSharksPC]

i'd like it if she seduced each guy, one at a time, then the two friends got together and she seduced them together

after that, she seduces daddy, and finally gets all 3 at the same time

thats just me

 

[Christine*1981]

I like the idea ~ but I´d let her seduce only one of daddy´s friends and later daddy joins them. I always find it confusing when there are too many guys at work...

 

[~ Kit ~]

Another twist could be that she thinks she seduced the friend but it was all set up by her father. There'd be opportunity for the father to use her actions against her.

 

[cosprings04]

Story

Would I write it here?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Yikes. We're already on shaky ground when this registered member joined the site in September but didn't turn legal until December 14!

Of course, she is an adult now...

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Would I write it here?

You would enter the Story section of Lit, click on Login at the top of the screen, and then "Submit work" once you've logged into your user name to submit a story to this site.

 

[ewopper]

ok so this is the basic idea of a story i have been thinking of writing
young girl seduces 2 of her daddy's freinds into double teaming her. unknown to her, her father catches them but doesn't them know. then when confronted she seduces daddy as well. thats the basic plot. what do you think? any suggestions?

It's a good story idea but has been used frequently in the family letters and incest magazines you can buy at truck stops and cigarette outlets to get some ideas. the stories btw are supposed to be true

 

[Wltdnfaded]

Has anyone picked this idea up? Because I'd be willing to give it a shot.

Ivy

 

[bisexplicit]

Has anyone picked this idea up? Because I'd be willing to give it a shot.

Ivy

Go ahead and write it - anyone who did so would put their own unique twist on it, anyway.

Plus, you can never have too many daddy/daughter stories.

 

[sirhugs]

Go ahead and write it - anyone who did so would put their own unique twist on it, anyway.

Plus, you can never have too many daddy/daughter stories.

I do so like how your mind works

 

[motorhomemale]

What about she THINKS it's her daddy's friend, but in the dark room she doesn't find out it's dad until they are finished.

 

[Texguy84]

I like the idea ~ but I´d let her seduce only one of daddy´s friends and later daddy joins them. I always find it confusing when there are too many guys at work...

Dunno, one of my favorite images has always been the until-now presumed-to-be innocent girl on her hands and knees, cock in mouth, cock in ass, and cock in pussy, getting fucked six ways to Tuesday.

 

[J.Q. Hack]

Like you said you can never have too many daughter/father stories. But how do you go about making it interesting and unique? I like the idea of the daughter being set up by the father, but has this been done before?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Dunno, one of my favorite images has always been the until-now presumed-to-be innocent girl on her hands and knees, cock in mouth, cock in ass, and cock in pussy, getting fucked six ways to Tuesday.

Mmmmmmmm...

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Like you said you can never have too many daughter/father stories. But how do you go about making it interesting and unique? I like the idea of the daughter being set up by the father, but has this been done before?

Chances are "everything" has been done before. How you make it interesting and unique is by you writing it. It's extremely unlikely that someone else out there shares your brain "word for word". Something you come up with might be something someone else never thought of before, and vice versa.

Your best bet is to write a "daddy/daughter" story that you like. Simply put.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

ok so this is the basic idea of a story i have been thinking of writing
young girl seduces 2 of her daddy's freinds into double teaming her. unknown to her, her father catches them but doesn't them know. then when confronted she seduces daddy as well. thats the basic plot. what do you think? any suggestions?

That's not a plot. As a writer...there has to be a Why...there needs to be a reason. There is nothing original in your idea...Lit is full of stories like this..do we really need another one?

 

[sirhugs]

That's not a plot. As a writer...there has to be a Why...there needs to be a reason. There is nothing original in your idea...Lit is full of stories like this..do we really need another one?

I think the basic stroke affecionados would say " heck, yes, we need another one, we need about 4 a day..."

With help from posters here, the basic idea might be molded into a suitable entry. Perhaps you have some positive contributions, for example, as to "why"?

 

[Ravendale7]

Your idea

Maybe the idea could start out like the characters in "Must Love Dogs" she answers a personal ad from her dad. Maybe it could be a family friend.
Hey, that could spring it out to sOmething different as waS mentioned. A "Plot"

The Midnight Raver

 

[bisexplicit]

she answers a personal ad from her dad

This plot has actually been done a few times, but I'm sure someone could have some interesting twists on it.

 

[Texguy84]

This plot has actually been done a few times, but I'm sure someone could have some interesting twists on it.

Her dad works at the newspaper, and thus was able to look up who left the ad?

This, of course, brings us back to "Secretly perving on daughter" but at least it's in a way I haven't seen yet.

 

[sirhugs]

Her dad works at the newspaper, and thus was able to look up who left the ad?

This, of course, brings us back to "Secretly perving on daughter" but at least it's in a way I haven't seen yet.

and presents an interesting challenge for him as to how to act on his knowing she's looking without the obvious blnnd date , which he knows would just end badly.

 

[Texguy84]

and presents an interesting challenge for him as to how to act on his knowing she's looking without the obvious blnnd date , which he knows would just end badly.

And perhaps also allows for a sideplot with the sexy newspaper editor lady chasing after the dad throughout the story, with varying degrees of obliviousness on his part.