My Story, I hope you don't mind if I add it?

[BriefcaseRonin]

This is the link to my unapproved story on Chyoo, I hope you like it.. what little of it there is, and possibly add to it:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/3163

 

[jakelyon]

Good Start

This is the link to my unapproved story on Chyoo, I hope you like it.. what little of it there is, and possibly add to it:

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/3163

To quote an old show "it has a good beat and I can dance to it"...

But getting back to your story it is a good start, well written with good directions, no pun intended, to go. I will try and add to it in the next couple of weeks.

Keep going on the thread you started as I want to see where it leads.

 

[BriefcaseRonin]

Thanks, Yeah, I tried to make it very open ended to give a lot of chance for other writers to do what they wanted with the story and I would love to see people adding to it.

 

[BriefcaseRonin]

Bump

Just a bump after all those strange posts.

 

[derek00]

Come to C3

Import it into Chyoo3's system - it's at www.chyoo.net. Should make it a little easier to get some attention.