My stories

[Yshomatsu]

My stories, requesting alpha readers

wondering if anyone that has read my stories would like to discuss ideas with me? Have been writing the next bit for almost a year and with work keeping me busy I have fallen out of it. Would like to pick it up again and finish what I started

 

[sr71plt]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=999608&page=submissions

 

[lovecraft68]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=999608&page=submissions

Nice gesture



To the OP its customary when you're looking for feedback to post a link so people can check you out without having to look for it which is not always easy as the author search seems to have changed. This way you'll be sure to get some feedback.

 

[Yshomatsu]

Thought I did, opps, thank you =P

 

[Yshomatsu]

I typed up my notebook that I slowly wrote in over the past 8 months. Latest story is up to 22,000+ words and side story just over 4k.

Took all day to type it all up but sure did feel good. If anyone would like to alpha read and give feedback let me know, would mean a lot.

Latest story introduces a new main character and has background flash backs. Nothing erotic written yet, just pure story, character dev. and plot... oh my!

Also it has gone more towards fantasy than nonhuman, if that has any meaning to anyone. Might have a chance for horror but who knows.

 

[astuffedshirt_perv]

I looked through Jedi stowaway. Not much sex for a story on a sex story site. Not that the story is bad, it just doesn't have much to entice a non-star wars fan.
And for what you just wrote, 22K words with nothing erotic. Is there a reason you are posting on Literotica?

 

[Yshomatsu]

The Succubus stories are all erotic, and the two stories I'm working on are in the Succubus world, the shorter one is more like the general stories on this site. (Short intro then dives into the sex and so on)

The Star Wars story was requested by a few of my fans that wanted to see more of my writing even though I told them it wasn't meant to be for this site. Just something I was doing on the side. (First story of that didn't have anything erotic because the main character was too young so to avoid that whole area I didn't edit in anything and just posted as it was. Second I threw a scene in to lay ground work if I later decided to turn that series into something for this site) So I am well aware that series doesn't exactly belong here but I've read quite a few non erotic stories on this site that were really good.

As for why my latest is 22k without erotic, what I meant by that is as of now because I was writing in a notebook at work the sex scenes I have planned were just skipped. I kept writing the main story line. That being said the whole time I had planned on this story being more than just sex. There are a lot of my favorite stories on here just like that