My Sister Sasha--rejected...

[ninefe2dg]

...I can see the reason, there was concern about underage. I can see where one could mistakenly infer it, but ABSOLUTELY not intended. Do I simply put in a disclaimer at the front in italics. Or simply add a sentence clarifying that Sasha is at least 18, (which she is supposed to be).

Thanks for any advice.

*oops!*...embarrassed!

 

[sr71plt]

Whenever I thought there'd be a problem of age, I'd work something into the context of the story to identify the questionable character as of legal age. I've never had a story questioned on that aspect and I've cut it just about as close as can be cut (with a story of the action happening on a young man's 18th birthday).

 

[drksideofthemoon]

...I can see the reason, there was concern about underage. I can see where one could mistakenly infer it, but ABSOLUTELY not intended. Do I simply put in a disclaimer at the front in italics. Or simply add a sentence clarifying that Sasha is at least 18, (which she is supposed to be).

Thanks for any advice.

*oops!*...embarrassed!

I put a disclaimer on all of my work.

 

[ninefe2dg]

Thanks, y'all...

...I revised to put in a disclaimer, plus I added a couple bits to make it crystal clear. I'll resubmit...thx again

 

[drksideofthemoon]

...I revised to put in a disclaimer, plus I added a couple bits to make it crystal clear. I'll resubmit...thx again

Good luck, and let us know when it's up so we can rip it...I mean review it...

 

[ninefe2dg]

Good luck, and let us know when it's up so we can rip it...I mean review it...

It will be a pleasure ...these are important stories I'm trying to tell here...Alicia Silverstone lookalike, Cheaters Radio Gags, and the like...hell someone's gotta write 'em.

I did resubmit with a disclaimer, and a couple tweaks to make "over 18" more explicit, thanks again!

There is a version on this board now (pasted)...feel free to rip at that one if you like!

 

[drksideofthemoon]

It will be a pleasure ...these are important stories I'm trying to tell here...Alicia Silverstone lookalike, Cheaters Radio Gags, and the like...hell someone's gotta write 'em.

I did resubmit with a disclaimer, and a couple tweaks to make "over 18" more explicit, thanks again!

There is a version on this board now (pasted)...feel free to rip at that one if you like!

Ohh, let me hunt down the thread....