My Second Book

[pornoperson]

I'm thinking of taking two stories from my first book that both have a robot theme and making a full-length work out of them. I've got a few ideas about where the story can/should go but I'm VERY curious as to what other people think. Would anyone be so kind as to take a gander and give opinions?

http://pornoperson.blogspot.com/2008/05/cerebral-trainee-subject-susan.html
http://pornoperson.blogspot.com/2008/05/cerebral-trainee-subject-susan-part-2.html

Thank yoU!

 

[TxRad]

You might do better with this over in the Feedback Forum