kelley_and_tracy
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- Aug 26, 2001
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I have read the majority of ‘reviews’ from those so inclined to respond to ‘authors’ asking feedback. I relish constructive criticism, how else can I strive to impress/please those that are so inclined to read my anecdotes. Although not new to Literotica, I am new to the forum titled “Story Feedback”. I agree, it is a thankless job for critics to read, review and respond to those desiring feedback I further submit that egos may be the driving force of those that ask for this review. Others may genuinely desire an improvement in their writing capabilities. I suggest you are not truly supportive to those that may be less educated. I was watching a popular movie one day, Gladiator. Two senators were discussing the succession of Commodus, Marcus Aurelius’s son. One of the senators thought that his reinstitution of the coliseum games was in direct conflict to what Rome truly was, an advanced city whose culture was for the good of all. The other senator debated that Commodus truly knew what Rome was, the satisfaction of the mobs desires. Now my opinion. Literotica is for the mob, the masses that flood the web site daily. Maybe it’s escape, voyeurism, or a desire to read stories about adventures that either capture their dreams, wants or desires, or simply a place to read about people like themselves. I don’t know nor do I care. I will offer this. I have submitted three stories to this great website. Prior to my posting in this forum, all enjoyed the “H” symbol (hot) with averages of 15.000 plus viewings above 4.5 on a scale of 5. Soon after my desire to further my writing abilities, posted in this forum, every single story has dropped in it’s average. Unfortunately we are all not on the same trolley. Trust me, the masses have spoken. It is not my wish to have you rate my stories higher. On the contrary, my stories and THOUSANDS like them are written for the masses. I do so appreciate the critic’s education and their knowledge of the English language. Your ‘encouragement’ of these first time authors should be just that. All stories submitted are ‘screened’ for review and rewrite prior to posting. Let us know what is needed to improve. Most of you offer this. My thread is for those who don’t. Thanks, TRACY