My new audio story . . .

[RedheadedBeauty]

I'd love to hear your feedback!

Thanks!

My new audio story . . . 'Gabriel'

 

[RedheadedBeauty]

I find it remarkable . . .

that there is an entire section on incest, here, yet some people can't handle a relatively tame horror story. Sad. I'm sorry if someone isn't being screwed or gang-raped, but that doesn't negate my story. LMAO!

Silly anonymous person.

 

[darkgoddess2478]

I really enjoyed this story. Did you narrate this yourself?

Some suggestions for the story- maybe add a bit to his history... it seems so abrupt that he would kidnap these redheads and chain them to die when he only employs redheads. What makes the distinction? Why does he keep some of them in his personal service and some of them end up in the secret chamber? If the room was sound proof, how did he hear her screams?

I love the premise of this story... I really do. And the way it played out was fantastic.

 

[RedheadedBeauty]

Thanks for the response. It's a first draft and I DO plan on going back and pumping up the backstory. I'd love to submit it for publication, so we'll see. There are a few holes, yes, and I need to tighten up his particular psychosis so that a makes real horrifying sense. I just need to find the time to revisit it.

Yes, I narrated it, myself.

 

[darkgoddess2478]

*nods* I can completely understand not having the time to do these things... I just thought it would be nice to post a response and give some suggestions.

You have a lovely voice. *smiles*