my neighbour

[walgator17]

I have noticed my neighbour (Tina) has a friend over, and they are playing in the yard near my patio. Dressed only in my speedos I began to feel the beginning of an erection. I had been watching Tina's friend doing handstands and other dancing and her panties were easy to see. They were pink and tight. Probably cotton. At one stage she put her hands and feet on the ground and arched her back. Her skirt had ridden up and her crotch was perfectly outlined by the tight fabric. I could see her little slit. I was so engrossed that I didn't notice Tina had come up next to me and was looking straight at my now enourmous bulge. "Do u like her?" she asked quietly, sounding a little jealous. When I told her that it was cos I could see up her skirt she cheered up a bit, "what if I put on my old ballarina dress, its really short?" and ran off.
While she was gone I got my phone and started taking pictures of her friend while she was doing some stretches. I had just taken a hot one of her crotch when Tina appeared dressed in the skimpiest little dress. She demanded to see what I had taken and snatched it out of my hand.but I was terrified she would show it to her friend so I grabbed her and pulled her down. I was still on my chair but now Tina was on my lap as we struggled for the phone. Her dress had ridden up and I could feel the sheer nylon fabic of the tightest little sport pants against my legs. It was then that her friend came over to see wot was going on. Tina playfully put her hands holding the phone between her legs and I happily followed but instead of trying to get the phone I began to fondle and rub her forcefully between her legs. I pulled her back so now she was sitting directly on my cock. I could feel her slit thru the nylon and I began to lose control and started grabbing her breasts with my other hand as I went into orgasm My massive load spurted thru my speedos right onto Tina's crotch and ass. Her friend just stared, her cheeks red. Tina was angry and she sprang up and ran inside, my cum running down her legs....to be continued

 

[jomar]

Thanks - I like the neighbor-patio setting, but it does need work and such as you know. Also, it's hard to read without paragraph breaks. When you write dialog don't use text-spell. Keep at it.

 

[kendo1]

I have serious misgivings about the age of the writer, and consequently the age of the people he is writing about.

I have seen better grammar and sentence structure from a seven year old. The spelling is atrocious and the use of 'text speech' makes me cringe.

In dialogue, each speech, even when only a single word, is written as a paragraph by itself. At each change of speaker start a new paragraph.