My Haikus

[Dar~]

I have thre enew Haikus up, I would love some feedback on them. They are the last three poems in my signature. Thanx

 

[My Erotic Tale]

I had a dream
of being breathless
in sizzling hot haikus <grin> (O_O)

they flowed with erotica~

 

[Dar~]

Thanks!

 

[always_smiling]

I have thre enew Haikus up, I would love some feedback on them. They are the last three poems in my signature. Thanx

I like them, Dar, but aren't Haiku poems supposed to be a count of 5, 7, 5? If there's something new out there that I don't know about, please let me know. I just always thought it was 17 syllables: first line being 5, second being 7, and the last would be another 5.