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Thumbs up, rg. I like the fact that you're a bit of a tease with the hot parts. I had to leave before chapt. 2, but enjoyed the first one enormously. Congratulations.
In fact, congratulations to all of you who have the courage to submit your work. It's a jungle out here.
Edited to add: Chapter 2 will keep until I post to my SRP threads, right? I'm going to be ravished and I have to pre-rip my bodice.
In fact, congratulations to all of you who have the courage to submit your work. It's a jungle out here.
Edited to add: Chapter 2 will keep until I post to my SRP threads, right? I'm going to be ravished and I have to pre-rip my bodice.
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This really is a love story with sex, isn’t it? It’s told with remarkable tenderness and wistfulness, and very nicely done.
And even though the story is called “Fatima”, it's really about Carl. He’s the one we’re getting to know, and it’s his warmth and personality that infuse the whole story.
It’s a very sweet story, and I'm almost afraid to see Sex rear its ugly head, but I’m sure it’ll be handled with the same sensitivity as Part I. I'll report on it later. You have reason to be proud.
---dr.M.
And even though the story is called “Fatima”, it's really about Carl. He’s the one we’re getting to know, and it’s his warmth and personality that infuse the whole story.
It’s a very sweet story, and I'm almost afraid to see Sex rear its ugly head, but I’m sure it’ll be handled with the same sensitivity as Part I. I'll report on it later. You have reason to be proud.
---dr.M.
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Thank you all!
I'm having trouble finding the right words to thank all the people that have read and commented on my story.
Each person has had something different, and nice, to say about it. That's what really make me feel good. That the story, and what skill I bought to it, speaks in so many ways.
Dr. M, there's no sex until chapter 3. And very little there. Chapter 4 is almost nothing but, so you might want to skip that one.
I'm going to be walking on sunshine for the rest of the day.
Shereads? If you need a bodice ripped, I'm your man.
I'm having trouble finding the right words to thank all the people that have read and commented on my story.
Each person has had something different, and nice, to say about it. That's what really make me feel good. That the story, and what skill I bought to it, speaks in so many ways.
Dr. M, there's no sex until chapter 3. And very little there. Chapter 4 is almost nothing but, so you might want to skip that one.
I'm going to be walking on sunshine for the rest of the day.
Shereads? If you need a bodice ripped, I'm your man.
dr_mabeuse
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Re: Thank you all!
Yeah, you're hooked now.
Now you know why we all write.
---dr.M.
rgraham666 said:
Yeah, you're hooked now.
Now you know why we all write.
---dr.M.
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All done
The last chapter posted this morning.
Fatima is done.
This has been one of the great experiences of my life. All the positive feedback I have gotten has done more for my self esteem than can be described. It has improved enough that I'm well into my second story. It's very different from the first.
So thank you one and all for the comments and support.
If you'll excuse me, I'm off to do some more dancing.
"Heaven, I'm in Heaven…"
The last chapter posted this morning.
Fatima is done.
This has been one of the great experiences of my life. All the positive feedback I have gotten has done more for my self esteem than can be described. It has improved enough that I'm well into my second story. It's very different from the first.
So thank you one and all for the comments and support.
If you'll excuse me, I'm off to do some more dancing.
"Heaven, I'm in Heaven…"
G
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Huge congrats, RG, it is a wonderful feeling, isn't it!?
Looks like my Sunday reading is sorted.
Here's to many more successful and rewarding stories.
Lou
Looks like my Sunday reading is sorted.
Here's to many more successful and rewarding stories.
Lou
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More sex
It's very interesting following the voting patterns.
The first three chapters, with almost no sex in them, average about 1% voting rates. That is for every 100 views, someone votes.
Chapter 4, which is almost all sex, is averaging a 10% voting rate.
Obviously, I'm going to have to have more sex in my stories.
Naaah! I'll write what ever I damn well please. I would rather have people vote on my writing skills. Such as they are.
It's very interesting following the voting patterns.
The first three chapters, with almost no sex in them, average about 1% voting rates. That is for every 100 views, someone votes.
Chapter 4, which is almost all sex, is averaging a 10% voting rate.
Obviously, I'm going to have to have more sex in my stories.
Naaah! I'll write what ever I damn well please. I would rather have people vote on my writing skills. Such as they are.
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