My First written story

[ravenmx]

I just had a story accepted and would like feedback on it (I hope I am doing this correct as a thread).

I have never written before but love to daydream. I thought I would try my hand at writing and was encouraged by friends to submit.

I submited to a couple sites and was rejected, but one site forwarded me to Literotica.

Any way I am looking for good and bad feedback on my story. I am in the process of writing another and would like all kinds of feedback to improve my writing skills.

Thank you in advance to everyone that gives feedback.


My story

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=166525

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Welcome to the club, raven, but you might do better posting your request for feedback over on the Story Feedback board:

https://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?s=&forumid=1

That's set up specifically for giving and getting feedback.

As you can see, in the Author's Hangout we're too busy doing God-knows-what.

---dr.M.

 

[ravenmx]

dr_mabeuse


Thank you, I wasnt sure if I was in the right place or not. I was trying to read all the forums to find out where and there are so many!!

Thanks again and I will move it. I appreciate the info.