My first submission!

[Remy_James]

Hey all, my first submission was finally accepted last night. I'm very anxious to see what people think and I already have a review from a kind friend.

It's under the BDSM category, but it's less bondage and more S&M/Domination/Grudge Fuck. I felt that fitting a big love story into a first submission would be kinda bland so I eliminated the contrived lovemaking and reduced it to animalistic lust and just plain fucking. Hope you like, later.


My story should be in my sig below.

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Putting the story link isn't much use to those of us that have sig's switched off

I remember a thread cropping up about the grudge fuck thing. think it was yours. Interesting to see it in action. He's happy to be submissive up until the the point when it gets irritating. I think i can identify with that .

I liked the buildup on both characters. the only thing that jarred for me was when you gave her exact height and referred to her as possibly a BBW. I think more generic description would have been better here.