My First Storys But i Need some input please help

[Guest]

i have been a long time reader of this
place and im thinking of writeing some
stroyes i want them to be realistic and
make you want and disire a nothers touch
but i also want them to be frecky
adventurist and above all confuseing
untill the end off the final story what
do you people think?

 

[Guest]

Significant improvement of spelling and sentence structure is needed in order for stories to be of value. It makes no difference how great your ideas are, I (and many others) will give up in the first paragraph if there isn't some semblance of English skill demonstrated.

 

[MorningStar]

Smile...don't give up. There's always spell and grammer check available on most good word processing programs. Get your ideas down and if nothing else, maybe someone could help you proof read the story before submission.

 

[robertreams]

Let your imagination flow write it all, then go back and spell and grammar check. Then use one of the volunteer editors on this site. As for the stories, themselves, The devil is in the details. Don't just say his cock entered her and she cried out. Tell us what things looked like. What color was the cock, what shape, what size. Same for her pussy. Was it pale and pink and pulsing? (lol) Or was it opening slowly to allow him access, petal by petal, like a bright blood red rose?

 

[oggbashan]

Why are you reviving threads from the distant past?