My first story

[SkeeterHawk]

Would love to get some feed back from readers and authors regrding my first submission, Fine Caviar. The first chapter was posted on 12/18. Chapter 2 has been submitted and should be up any day. I have three more chapters I would like to submit assuming the feedback is positive.

The story is based on a true experience and I had a ball writing it. Hope you all enjoy.

Skeeter

 

[Priaphan]

"Fine Caviar" is a literate, well-written story; vivid description; quite a stimulating and arousing story. I'm surprised that "Fine Caviar" is the first story you've written. You are a dang good writer.