Dragonman_69
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- Jan 8, 2006
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Hi all,
Like a number of threads below i have just had the first part of my first story accepted, and it's quite a nice feeling.
This is the first time i have sat down and written a story since i was at school, and i can assure you that was many, many years ago!
If anyone out there, writers and/or readers, can offer any good advice, or constructive criticism it would be greatly appreciated.
If you take the time to read it i hope you enjoy it, whether you respond to this thread or not.
Thanking you in advance!
G xxx
The link is given below, but if that doesn't work the story is called - Your story - and it's in new stories, and destined for the fetish section.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=236598
Like a number of threads below i have just had the first part of my first story accepted, and it's quite a nice feeling.
This is the first time i have sat down and written a story since i was at school, and i can assure you that was many, many years ago!
If anyone out there, writers and/or readers, can offer any good advice, or constructive criticism it would be greatly appreciated.
If you take the time to read it i hope you enjoy it, whether you respond to this thread or not.
Thanking you in advance!
G xxx
The link is given below, but if that doesn't work the story is called - Your story - and it's in new stories, and destined for the fetish section.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=236598
