My First Story

[Mediator]

Please read my story and let me know what you think. It's my first one. Thanks.

 

[DopeyAngel]

It was far too difficult to find your story, you didn't give the name of the story, or the section it is in so you are unlikely to get feedback as people simply can't be bothered to try so hard to help you!

So, i have done it for you,

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=39548

now you should get some feedback!