My First Story

[tonybart49]

Hi Everyone

I have the first three parts of my first story, posted now, and the 4th part is on the way. Feedback would be welcome. I have at least two more parts to write, but I have not decided how it will end yet.

Thanks
Tony

The link to part one is:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=194803

 

[msboy8]

I Read, Voted and Commented on your three stories. You need a proofreader or an editor, your spell checker is just not doing the job. Otherwise, it's a great series.