My first story, would love feedback.

[Zaudika]

Hey everyone. I just recently submitted my first story today. I think it takes a couple of days to get up, but I'd love to have some feedback once it is up.
If you like Dom/sub relationships, control, and anal then you'll have no problem reading it.
Its really one of the first stories I've written, its kinda long.. but once again, would love your feedback...
It'll be posted in the BDSM section, and called "Waiting by the front door"
Thanks!
-Zaudika

 

[AnneOR]

make sure you post a link to the story...some of us are lazy

 

[Zaudika]

Thanks AnneOR.. =) I'm actually going to repost it once I know for sure the story has been put up. It was an 'oops' on my part to write the post before the story actually went up. *blush* .. sorry about that. Still learning the system. =)
-Zaudika